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Think no more I know what you are going to do.
Don’t do anything to ruin this moment.
Because I know you are finding a way to break my heart.
I will never know if you did what you meant.
I will never know if you were the one that grew apart.
But I’m trying, so hard, to make it impossible for you to leave.
I am trying to make it impossible or you to say the words that would hurt me so much.
I don’t want to feel lonely and grieve, leave me in the cold with nothing to hold, except for my pride as a crutch….
But it is soon to be done and my love will be gone.
And all I wanted was to be loved, all I wanted was to be held.
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All I Wanted

Contributed by sabrina on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:10:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Say no more, I know what you’re thinking.
Think no more I know what you are going to do.
Don’t do anything to ruin this moment.
Because I know you are finding a way to break my heart.
I will never know if you did what you meant.
I will never know if you were the one that grew apart.
But I’m trying, so hard, to make it impossible for you to leave.
I am trying to make it impossible or you to say the words that would hurt me so much.
I don’t want to feel lonely and grieve, leave me in the cold with nothing to hold, except for my pride as a crutch….
But it is soon to be done and my love will be gone.
And all I wanted was to be loved, all I wanted was to be held.

Copyright Â© sabrina ... [ 2004-12-19 00:10:39]
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Re: All I Wanted (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:30:52 AM AEST
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Cool write, just wished you could have fixed the stanzas nicely, but overall it was nicely written.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: All I Wanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:47:31 AM AEST
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yo jane check mine out i think hers r fine good write sucks when they leave u broken and wanting more

Re: All I Wanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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love and lonelyness come and go and the one thing i have learned is that it hurts all the time

i have never wanted to end a relationship i wasn never to end it but alot of them have

but i have always bounced back coz i am so shallow

just kidding

great write

Re: All I Wanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:33:36 AM AEST
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keep tryin...he wont leave....love the way uve put it

Umang.

Re: All I Wanted (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 03:47:28 PM AEST
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great write, i like the way the stanzas are :)! it manages to say everything you feel at these moments... :( this line was the one that got me -
"But I’m trying, so hard, to make it impossible for you to leave."
katie xx

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