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Array ( [sid] => 76385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Trying To Move On [time] => 2004-12-18 18:58:52 [hometext] => The past 3 months I've been trying to get over my first love. It really is true that first loves always hurt the worst. Those of you who read this please pray for me, most probably know how it feels. [bodytext] => The days are slowly moving on.
I guess that I am too.
For my love has burned out, now that i'm not with you.

I've been searching for an answer..i've been crying out a prayer.
But now my heart is gone ..and emptiness fills the air.

Now I'm getting used to the fact that you're not coming back.
I'm trying to deal with this a little better, although everything seems to dim so black.

I wish I didn't feel this, I wish I could move on.
Your face still haunts my dreams, and seems to linger on.

Sometimes I look at the places that we used to be.
Then it hits me your with her..and that you'll always hate me.

What goes around comes around although I can't see it now.
What goes up must come down and I know things will work out. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Sweetheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

I'm Trying To Move On

Contributed by Sweetheart on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The days are slowly moving on.
I guess that I am too.
For my love has burned out, now that i'm not with you.

I've been searching for an answer..i've been crying out a prayer.
But now my heart is gone ..and emptiness fills the air.

Now I'm getting used to the fact that you're not coming back.
I'm trying to deal with this a little better, although everything seems to dim so black.

I wish I didn't feel this, I wish I could move on.
Your face still haunts my dreams, and seems to linger on.

Sometimes I look at the places that we used to be.
Then it hits me your with her..and that you'll always hate me.

What goes around comes around although I can't see it now.
What goes up must come down and I know things will work out.

Copyright © Sweetheart ... [ 2004-12-18 18:58:52]
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Re: I'm Trying To Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:12:07 PM AEST
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Awww, that's so sad.
So heartwrenching too.
Look, I firmly believe that things happen for a reason.
Maybe this is just to make you stronger. And you are strong.

Um, I think the poem would have a slightly greater effect if the first and second line were made into one.
Still, great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: I'm Trying To Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:42:49 PM AEST
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It does hurt, indeed.
Just remember that everything that hurts us also gives us an opportunity to grow. And I hope you will find comfort soon.

God bless and keep you.

Andrew

Re: I'm Trying To Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:13:11 PM AEST
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great job....very moving

Re: I'm Trying To Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:51:17 AM AEST
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Im still trying to get over someone i love. Hes not my first love, but i loved him more than i did my first love. I know you wont believe it right now, but u will get over it soon.

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