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Array ( [sid] => 76357 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Angel [time] => 2004-12-18 14:44:28 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my daughter Angel, who never made it to this world [bodytext] => I've got your name
tattered on my arm
If you had made it to this world
you'd have faced no harm

But I never knew you were on your way
until it was too late
Such a cruel stroke
by the hand of fate

I live on
though you're not here
Baby just remember
daddy will always be near
As I sit here thinking about you
I shed another tear

Though you never entered my life
you changed me
The loss of you
let me see
That I wasn't
who I needed to be

We named you angel
because thats what you are
Without my lil girl
life has been hard

I got my tatoo
in your memory
I'll join you in heaven
just save a place for me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 55 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

My Angel

Contributed by crash on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I've got your name
tattered on my arm
If you had made it to this world
you'd have faced no harm

But I never knew you were on your way
until it was too late
Such a cruel stroke
by the hand of fate

I live on
though you're not here
Baby just remember
daddy will always be near
As I sit here thinking about you
I shed another tear

Though you never entered my life
you changed me
The loss of you
let me see
That I wasn't
who I needed to be

We named you angel
because thats what you are
Without my lil girl
life has been hard

I got my tatoo
in your memory
I'll join you in heaven
just save a place for me

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-12-18 14:44:28]
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Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:59:10 PM AEST
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Oh my. *Dabs eyes with tissues*That was so sad! I am so sorry about your daughter. But your poem is wonderful....in a sad makes you cry sorta way.

Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:20:55 PM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful.....and so sad... It brought tears to my eyes cuz we faced the same thing in June of this year......
Understand your pian ..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Hihocherio on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:06:39 AM AEST
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Aww, Im sorry about your daughter. This was a wonderful poem that brought a few tears to my eyes.

Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:45:07 PM AEST
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This poem is such a sad write, I'm sorry bout your daughter, and I hope you are with her now.
Better dayz
~jace~

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