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Array ( [sid] => 76272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Galactic Mess [time] => 2004-12-17 21:35:01 [hometext] => It seems something has agitated the ambassadors... [bodytext] => I have seen the jumping horses
They are streetlights in distress
I have read the planet's discourses
How did we get into this galactic mess?

It seems something
Has agitated the ambassadors
They're in quite a fit
Over deliberations of peace
And the Solar System wants to quit

Now, I love a good show
Just like anybody
With candies, popcorn
And a nice, big soda to drink
But when the thing across from you
Tries to eat you as a compromise
It's a little bit hard to think

I want to take a mop
And even just one drop
Of wisdom would help shine this floor
Of galatic delegates up like new
We will get the people all ready
Before this place looks like a futuristic zoo [comments] => 2 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Lee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Galactic Mess

Contributed by Lee on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I have seen the jumping horses
They are streetlights in distress
I have read the planet's discourses
How did we get into this galactic mess?

It seems something
Has agitated the ambassadors
They're in quite a fit
Over deliberations of peace
And the Solar System wants to quit

Now, I love a good show
Just like anybody
With candies, popcorn
And a nice, big soda to drink
But when the thing across from you
Tries to eat you as a compromise
It's a little bit hard to think

I want to take a mop
And even just one drop
Of wisdom would help shine this floor
Of galatic delegates up like new
We will get the people all ready
Before this place looks like a futuristic zoo

Copyright © Lee ... [ 2004-12-17 21:35:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Galactic Mess (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:23:07 AM AEST
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i like the rhymes in this poem

not your every day kind

Re: Galactic Mess (User Rating: 1 )
by voiceinthewilderness on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:42:18 AM AEST
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thats sweet yo, good imagination! Good work.

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