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There Sits a Raven

Contributed by TaintedSoul on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Twisting energies –
warping realities.

Haunting memories that
surface with such fervently.

Twitterpated is the heart –
a maddening drum beat not to be ignored.

Get out!

Let me think a moment before
you begin again with that incessant
thrum of memories.

Yes, the curiosity is insatiable –
what was it that you did?

More so, why did you let me in.

Haunting me you are, with your
energy and memory –
forever entwined.

But never shall this thread fray.

Here we stand, worlds apart as
building crumble and lives decay –
yet together we stand in rampant memories.

A raven sits on a wire, calling my name.

12 July 2004




Copyright © TaintedSoul ... [ 2004-12-17 19:58:45]
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Re: There Sits a Raven (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:20:21 AM AEST
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excellent write. i thought a lot of this was creative even if it used 4 words for a stanza, i guess its because it rhymed =] it was a captivating read and an interesting end. and i liked how this was basically unrestricted in a strick type of format. this deserves more comments.


Re: There Sits a Raven (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:45:38 PM AEST
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this poem is emotional, rythmatic, and well writen. I like it, and hope the best


Re: There Sits a Raven (User Rating: 1 )
by One on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:35:26 AM AEST
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'A raven sits on a wire, calling my name'

do you answer the call? or are you asphyxiated?

-one-




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