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There Sits a Raven
Contributed by
TaintedSoul
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Twisting energies –
warping realities.
Haunting memories that
surface with such fervently.
Twitterpated is the heart –
a maddening drum beat not to be ignored.
Get out!
Let me think a moment before
you begin again with that incessant
thrum of memories.
Yes, the curiosity is insatiable –
what was it that you did?
More so, why did you let me in.
Haunting me you are, with your
energy and memory –
forever entwined.
But never shall this thread fray.
Here we stand, worlds apart as
building crumble and lives decay –
yet together we stand in rampant memories.
A raven sits on a wire, calling my name.
12 July 2004
Copyright ©
TaintedSoul
... [
2004-12-17 19:58:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: There Sits a Raven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:20:21 AM AEST (User
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excellent write. i thought a lot of this was creative even if it used 4 words for a stanza, i guess its because it rhymed =] it was a captivating read and an interesting end. and i liked how this was basically unrestricted in a strick type of format. this deserves more comments. |
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Re: There Sits a Raven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crash on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:45:38 PM AEST (User
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this poem is emotional, rythmatic, and well writen. I like it, and hope the best |
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Re: There Sits a Raven
(User Rating: 1 ) by One on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:35:26 AM AEST (User
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'A raven sits on a wire, calling my name'
do you answer the call? or are you asphyxiated?
-one- |
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