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Array ( [sid] => 76216 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Room [time] => 2004-12-17 15:02:25 [hometext] => My poem about me being trapped in my mind and unable to get out. Comments appriciated. [bodytext] => I'm trapped in a room.
No sound. No light.
I can't get out.
I cannot fight.
I'm trapped in my mind.
My soul is gone.
So insane.
Don't know right from wrong.
I'm struggling to get out.
I'm really trying.
I'm always struggling.
To keep from crying.
I scream for help.
I yell and moan.
My voice echo's.
I'm completely alone.
There's nobody there.
Now I see.
No one will help.
I only have me.
I refuse to give up.
I claw at the door.
My fingers turn bloody
as I sink to the floor.
I'll always fight.
I'll always wait.
Waiting for the day
I see the light.
Maybe that door will be opened.
Somebody. Oneday.
Somebody will come.
To show me the way. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Makeshift_2134 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dark Room

Contributed by Makeshift_2134 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:02:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm trapped in a room.
No sound. No light.
I can't get out.
I cannot fight.
I'm trapped in my mind.
My soul is gone.
So insane.
Don't know right from wrong.
I'm struggling to get out.
I'm really trying.
I'm always struggling.
To keep from crying.
I scream for help.
I yell and moan.
My voice echo's.
I'm completely alone.
There's nobody there.
Now I see.
No one will help.
I only have me.
I refuse to give up.
I claw at the door.
My fingers turn bloody
as I sink to the floor.
I'll always fight.
I'll always wait.
Waiting for the day
I see the light.
Maybe that door will be opened.
Somebody. Oneday.
Somebody will come.
To show me the way.

Copyright © Makeshift_2134 ... [ 2004-12-17 15:02:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dark Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:32:16 PM AEST
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i love this poem it has such a good rhyme scheme and rhythm to it and it makes alot of sense sometimes i feel that way keep it up
Kay-Kay

Re: Dark Room (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:49:28 PM AEST
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this is a great poem....u have talent...great job.....excellent write....i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Dark Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:41:08 PM AEST
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excellent write =]

Re: Dark Room (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:06:59 PM AEST
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The torment gleams brightly within the words. Trapped in one's own mind is a horrible place to be.

peace
TS

Re: Dark Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Kratur on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:35:02 AM AEST
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just like when you fall through the cracks of a video game's programming
bound forever in the glitch room
no escape
save for the godsend
we call a reset button...

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