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[title] => Another Letter
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[bodytext] => Writing - not speaking - leveled me from person to persona but not really for lack of trying until this week. I thought about erasing you - the good, the bad - but I could/would never if I had the chance. Do you realize we've never danced? Would it be awkward? I feel like nothing. Why are you so heavy in my mind? Why do you take priority over someone else who could love me right? This lingering psychosis seems surreal. I am numb away from you, but I want to know what YOU feel. I miss you every day. I hope that you think of me, too. I may run out of hope, but will never run out of love for you. I would drop everything at any moment in my life. I would die to be held by you for just one entire night. It's not right but it's true. I am beset by these feelings for you. I can't move. I won't see what's real. I don't want to give up or begin to heal. If it's up to me, I'll never get over you. What's between us, we can't un-do. I want to keep finding new ways. Damn it, I really wanted to see you today.
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Another Letter
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Writing - not speaking - leveled me from person to persona but not really for lack of trying until this week. I thought about erasing you - the good, the bad - but I could/would never if I had the chance. Do you realize we've never danced? Would it be awkward? I feel like nothing. Why are you so heavy in my mind? Why do you take priority over someone else who could love me right? This lingering psychosis seems surreal. I am numb away from you, but I want to know what YOU feel. I miss you every day. I hope that you think of me, too. I may run out of hope, but will never run out of love for you. I would drop everything at any moment in my life. I would die to be held by you for just one entire night. It's not right but it's true. I am beset by these feelings for you. I can't move. I won't see what's real. I don't want to give up or begin to heal. If it's up to me, I'll never get over you. What's between us, we can't un-do. I want to keep finding new ways. Damn it, I really wanted to see you today.
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Re: Another Letter
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:26:38 PM AEST
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ya know i've always put writing before anything else in my life...aside from me....
ever since i discovered it at sixteen(poetry i mean) that has been the most important, driving force of my life.
And as far as seeing whats real....well.....you don't want to....believe me...the truth is far from pretty....in fact i'm working on something about that....it's not done yet......but i'm in just the right mindset for it so(three hours of sleep twelve hours of work) all i need is a cup of waffle house coffee....and a cigarette....
anyway...i have to be rambling theres a lot of......going on so....yeah i am....i hate it, i can't stop...ok i'm done good stuff keep writing....don't forget to im me ^_^ it makes me feel appreciated^_^
always,
abraham |
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Re: Another Letter
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:36:07 PM AEST
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| Very good poem.. |
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