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Array ( [sid] => 76161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wanted to stay [time] => 2004-12-17 08:05:18 [hometext] => I wrote this from my heart to, let go of someone who was blind about my love for them. [bodytext] => I used to think your love was so obvious.
But lately I'm starting to question us.
Many nights I stayed up waiting to hear from you.
Not to even get a "hello" from you.
I truly think that your not in love with me.
I guess I'm writing this, to set you free.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay.
But your not around and it's been day's.
Don't wanna go, but I have to say.
Why you treat me bad, don't you know I love you babe?

Meeting you was a blessing in disguise
In my heart of hearts, I shut out all the other guy's
I was prepared for us to go and walk down the aisle
And do anythang, to go that "extra" mile.
Do you even give a damn at all that I cry?
You must not care....so I'll dry my eye's.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay
But your not around and it's been day's
Don't wanna go, but I have to say
I'm all cried out, don't you know I love you babe?

At no moment please don't think I am weak!
Yes it's true, I had many restless sleep.
Could've told me your not ready to settle down
Instead I feel like the world's most biggest clown.
To whom my "thoughts" may concern
Like Usher sang, I guess I'll it burn.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay
But your not around and it's been day's
Don't wanna go, but I have to say
One question to ask? Don't you know I loved you babe?
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Wanted to stay

Contributed by bronze_phoenix on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:05:18 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I used to think your love was so obvious.
But lately I'm starting to question us.
Many nights I stayed up waiting to hear from you.
Not to even get a "hello" from you.
I truly think that your not in love with me.
I guess I'm writing this, to set you free.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay.
But your not around and it's been day's.
Don't wanna go, but I have to say.
Why you treat me bad, don't you know I love you babe?

Meeting you was a blessing in disguise
In my heart of hearts, I shut out all the other guy's
I was prepared for us to go and walk down the aisle
And do anythang, to go that "extra" mile.
Do you even give a damn at all that I cry?
You must not care....so I'll dry my eye's.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay
But your not around and it's been day's
Don't wanna go, but I have to say
I'm all cried out, don't you know I love you babe?

At no moment please don't think I am weak!
Yes it's true, I had many restless sleep.
Could've told me your not ready to settle down
Instead I feel like the world's most biggest clown.
To whom my "thoughts" may concern
Like Usher sang, I guess I'll it burn.

Don't wanna go, wanted to stay
But your not around and it's been day's
Don't wanna go, but I have to say
One question to ask? Don't you know I loved you babe?




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Re: Wanted to stay (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:14:35 AM AEST
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Sad poem, very touching,
great write.!

MUAH
*~givingin~*


Re: Wanted to stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:23:26 AM AEST
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needs to be proofread for errors. an appostrophe 's' is supposed to be for possession or for a contraction. in the first stanza you rhymed you with you, which yes it rhymes, but it can be made more creative with another word.




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