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Array ( [sid] => 76157 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Didn't Hear Me Calling [time] => 2004-12-17 07:25:19 [hometext] => My soul was dying & you couldn't hear.. [bodytext] => Last night you didn’t hear me calling,
You didn’t realise how fast I was falling,
Deeper & deeper into my dark world,
A place where only hurt & heartache can unfurl.

I shouted & I called out to you,
To hug me, answer me is all you had to do,
I was left feeling unable to carry on,
Inside your heart I felt I didn’t belong.

My voice was weak maybe you couldn’t hear,
All I wanted, needed was to have you near,
But I don’t want to trap you by my side,
Never away from me I want you to run & hide.

I was sinking into depression I was being swallowed,
I felt like my soul was smashed & hollowed,
Felt like I’d been gutted like a fish,
Depression please go that’s my only wish.

Why did you fail to hear my calls of pain?
Did you want me to go through it alone again?
Was this my punishment for being unstable & ill?
Did I really deserve my tears to cascade & spill?
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You Didn't Hear Me Calling

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:25:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Last night you didn’t hear me calling,
You didn’t realise how fast I was falling,
Deeper & deeper into my dark world,
A place where only hurt & heartache can unfurl.

I shouted & I called out to you,
To hug me, answer me is all you had to do,
I was left feeling unable to carry on,
Inside your heart I felt I didn’t belong.

My voice was weak maybe you couldn’t hear,
All I wanted, needed was to have you near,
But I don’t want to trap you by my side,
Never away from me I want you to run & hide.

I was sinking into depression I was being swallowed,
I felt like my soul was smashed & hollowed,
Felt like I’d been gutted like a fish,
Depression please go that’s my only wish.

Why did you fail to hear my calls of pain?
Did you want me to go through it alone again?
Was this my punishment for being unstable & ill?
Did I really deserve my tears to cascade & spill?

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-12-17 07:25:19]
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Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:35:17 AM AEST
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Oh hunni. This actually hurts.
*hugs you tons*
But, I must say, this is an absolutley fantastic poem, I adore the way you write. It just seems so unfair you have to be so down to be able to do so.
The only think I would suggest is not usiing the & sign but using the actual word..
A stunning but heart wrenching write.
*hugs* Phil xxxx

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:11:39 AM AEST
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Sad poem pix,
great write though.
MUAH *~givingin~*

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:32:22 AM AEST
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The deeper the darkness.....even the faintest light can be a beacon. You are strong enough to get past this all my friend.
Roses
Larry

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:36:21 AM AEST
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This was good. It baffles me, how you write so much.

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:10:00 AM AEST
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Hi Pixie

*Bigs Hugs*

This is so sad, you know I'm gere for you hun. Excellent poem

Love Dawny xxx

How do you write so much??? Not fair!!!!!

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:57:54 AM AEST
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Awww you sound very depress pix.
I am sorry to hear that.That put tears in my eyes when i read your poem.I sometimes i feel that way too.hugs you lots.
take care kiddo.

Re: You Didn't Hear Me Calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:46:09 AM AEST
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Awww....Really touching....
((((hugs))))
Jenni

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