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Array ( [sid] => 76146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pointless Life [time] => 2004-12-17 03:34:05 [hometext] => A very recent write!! Please Comment!!!!!!! [bodytext] => Pointlesss Life......
12-15-04

I feel like life is
Pointless lately.......

Every new Dawn,
I awake and
Optimism is gone,
Motivation has
Abandoned my mind,
Nothing Positive about
my LIfe,
Can I recognize,
or Good Qualities
within my reflection,
can I find......

I feel overlooked
and at the same time,,
Singled OUt,
Constantly filled with ,
DOUBT.

Filled with Depression
and nourished by
PAIN,
Vomiting up sorrow,
Need my
SOULMATE,
to Console me,
Hold Me,
and Guide me out of
my,
Dark,Wasted REality..........

by: Dana a.k.a. $avage ~906~ *88* [comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 61 [informant] => desperatesoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Pointless Life

Contributed by desperatesoul on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:34:05 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Pointlesss Life......
12-15-04

I feel like life is
Pointless lately.......

Every new Dawn,
I awake and
Optimism is gone,
Motivation has
Abandoned my mind,
Nothing Positive about
my LIfe,
Can I recognize,
or Good Qualities
within my reflection,
can I find......

I feel overlooked
and at the same time,,
Singled OUt,
Constantly filled with ,
DOUBT.

Filled with Depression
and nourished by
PAIN,
Vomiting up sorrow,
Need my
SOULMATE,
to Console me,
Hold Me,
and Guide me out of
my,
Dark,Wasted REality..........

by: Dana a.k.a. $avage ~906~ *88*

Copyright © desperatesoul ... [ 2004-12-17 03:34:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:41:05 AM AEST
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Vomiting up sorrow,

i good line easy to swallow

i know how you feel i feel that way all the time and it just never seems to get better does it

Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:57:08 AM AEST
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very good poem. it's jus sad you feel this way.
i'm @ the point where i hardly feel nething no more

Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:40:49 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:08:29 AM AEST
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I'm sitting in a home without heat..its 18 degrees, my fingers are freezing.. I hope you appreciate this. good write..but whoever said vomit is easy to swallow is a ***** bird brain..LOL

Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:50:22 AM AEST
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So many feel this way but not many seem to be brave enough to express the pain they hold within. Too many mornings I've woken up feeling this way.

peace
TS

Re: Pointless Life (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:28:17 PM AEST
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i loved this....excellent write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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