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Array ( [sid] => 76141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just another teenage suicide [time] => 2004-12-17 02:20:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There's going to be another teenage suicide soon

but does anyone care

would anyone know

another lonely teenager

with self made scars all over

cuts and burns

longing to be happy

thoughts no one should think

all they can seem to find is pain and sadness

not knowing how many fake smiles and laughs they have left

not knowing how much longer they can take it

feeling lost and alone

crying night and day

wishing everyday was their last

then making that wish come true

longing to be happy has finally ended

another teenage suicide has just happened

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Just another teenage suicide

Contributed by jenipher on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:20:48 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

There's going to be another teenage suicide soon

but does anyone care

would anyone know

another lonely teenager

with self made scars all over

cuts and burns

longing to be happy

thoughts no one should think

all they can seem to find is pain and sadness

not knowing how many fake smiles and laughs they have left

not knowing how much longer they can take it

feeling lost and alone

crying night and day

wishing everyday was their last

then making that wish come true

longing to be happy has finally ended

another teenage suicide has just happened

(BANG)

Copyright © jenipher ... [ 2004-12-17 02:20:48]
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Re: Just another teenage suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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thats was a strong write sad but so true for alot of people i was one but didnt go throw but you said it so right good one.

Re: Just another teenage suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:30:10 AM AEST
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wow i am with out words

Re: Just another teenage suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Amanda_Interrupted on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:59:43 AM AEST
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I like this. Very creative style and very emotional. Good job!

Re: Just another teenage suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:08:41 AM AEST
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a very emotional and very tragic write, well put tho
pixie xx

Re: Just another teenage suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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I can feel this, I have been there before. I played russian ruelette myself but thankfully i didn't lose.

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