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Array ( [sid] => 76119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Final Thought Of You [time] => 2004-12-16 22:47:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Long cold lonely nights
is all that i have known lately
i'm always ***** tired
as my weeks pass by like days
finding comfort in the substance i abuse
trying to numb you out
i need to forget about you
i need to forget about you
finding love in bottles
green trees and piles of pure clean snow
you stay angry at my self destructiveness
i asked you, but i doubt you'll call me tonight
you constantly go on to the next
like is high school all over again
i could never be in your agenda
you over look me like i'm not here
you seem mad about everything i do
i dont mean as much to you
as you still do to me
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
vision blurry, tired and disoriented
my feet cold from poor circulation
CD skipping for hours, i can't move
mind still fixated on your smile
i wish i was a better person
or had some type of plan for my life
lack of motivation
people never find love in
stuck in this stagnent state
like green moss pond scum
that never gets clean
just Rots away
i spilled my heart onto paper
then let you read it
all you could say is that it was nice
i spilled my ***** heart
once this muscle heals
i'll never rip it apart
again, like so many times before
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
i thought of all your beauty
reincarnated it into a knife
slammed it into my chest
and smiled as the blood hit the floor
as the red began to puddle
i realized what i had done
by then it was far to late
and i had fallen for you
i asked you, but you didnt call me tonight
i will miss you dearly
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
i will forget about you
you will always be special to me
self destructive alegria
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My Final Thought Of You

Contributed by valek on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Long cold lonely nights
is all that i have known lately
i'm always ***** tired
as my weeks pass by like days
finding comfort in the substance i abuse
trying to numb you out
i need to forget about you
i need to forget about you
finding love in bottles
green trees and piles of pure clean snow
you stay angry at my self destructiveness
i asked you, but i doubt you'll call me tonight
you constantly go on to the next
like is high school all over again
i could never be in your agenda
you over look me like i'm not here
you seem mad about everything i do
i dont mean as much to you
as you still do to me
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
vision blurry, tired and disoriented
my feet cold from poor circulation
CD skipping for hours, i can't move
mind still fixated on your smile
i wish i was a better person
or had some type of plan for my life
lack of motivation
people never find love in
stuck in this stagnent state
like green moss pond scum
that never gets clean
just Rots away
i spilled my heart onto paper
then let you read it
all you could say is that it was nice
i spilled my ***** heart
once this muscle heals
i'll never rip it apart
again, like so many times before
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
i thought of all your beauty
reincarnated it into a knife
slammed it into my chest
and smiled as the blood hit the floor
as the red began to puddle
i realized what i had done
by then it was far to late
and i had fallen for you
i asked you, but you didnt call me tonight
i will miss you dearly
i need to forget about you
i want to forget about you
i will forget about you
you will always be special to me
self destructive alegria




Copyright © valek ... [ 2004-12-16 22:47:36]
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Re: My Final Thought Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:52:21 PM AEST
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i am wonering if i can read the uncencord version


Re: My Final Thought Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by KOZMICSPIRID on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:55:29 PM AEST
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NO offense but f**k her you can do better anyway man
muczluv-


Re: My Final Thought Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:53:53 AM AEST
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Keep writing, Valek.


Re: My Final Thought Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rashi4Evie66 on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:06:13 PM AEST
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I have never heard a male express himself in his poetry like you do. Not even if he raps. i can relte to you and your problems. Just keep your head up and everything will be alright I can gaurantee it. Keep up the good work.-Rahsi4Evie




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