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Array ( [sid] => 7611 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Angels [time] => 2002-11-28 11:00:00 [hometext] => Maybe not what you're expecting... is it ever? [bodytext] => An Angel looks like your perception of it,
Best be honest, I won’t be modest,
I might be pushed until the point of vomit,
Sick of the same old, day old ironic,
Sentence and words mixed, into a tonic.
The bait could be another tasty treat,
The taste is sweet,
I’m in trouble, I’m knee deep,
My prescriptions out, give me 100 repeats,
A thousand tasteless, and diamond VD,
Climb a tee-tree, it won’t be easy,
I’m not that needy, believe it, believe me.

My Angel drops me in a world that fails,
Beds or tails? Head of nails,
Trapped and slain in a cage of my own entrails,
I feel impaled, this place is stale,
This is a far cry from my fairy tale.
Yet the way it is, makes me weak,
Holds my sleep...
Gets me lost, all I’ve got are some sakes to keep.
So can you trust your Angel with every dream you see?
You’ll never be really free,
So walk the greenery, admire the scenery,
But you can’t go it alone,
Believe it, believe me.
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Angels

Contributed by Damon_Maynard on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

An Angel looks like your perception of it,
Best be honest, I won’t be modest,
I might be pushed until the point of vomit,
Sick of the same old, day old ironic,
Sentence and words mixed, into a tonic.
The bait could be another tasty treat,
The taste is sweet,
I’m in trouble, I’m knee deep,
My prescriptions out, give me 100 repeats,
A thousand tasteless, and diamond VD,
Climb a tee-tree, it won’t be easy,
I’m not that needy, believe it, believe me.

My Angel drops me in a world that fails,
Beds or tails? Head of nails,
Trapped and slain in a cage of my own entrails,
I feel impaled, this place is stale,
This is a far cry from my fairy tale.
Yet the way it is, makes me weak,
Holds my sleep...
Gets me lost, all I’ve got are some sakes to keep.
So can you trust your Angel with every dream you see?
You’ll never be really free,
So walk the greenery, admire the scenery,
But you can’t go it alone,
Believe it, believe me.

Copyright Â© Damon_Maynard ... [ 2002-11-28 11:00:00]
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Re: Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:48:09 PM AEST
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I really like the second half of this... sounds like it would make a good rap song!!...:)

Re: Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Bunty on Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:51:24 PM AEST
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Wow the imagery in this is pretty trippy..think I'll read this again when I'm high =)
And I liked the rhythm, fast paced and almost panicky, a bad trip maybe..?

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