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Array ( [sid] => 76079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frozen Sky [time] => 2004-12-16 18:48:59 [hometext] => Took me a while to write this one, and its still not as good as i hoped it would be, but its not too bad....i hope [bodytext] => I act like I’m Happy
Under that frozen sky
It’s like a crystal blanket
Leaving my world dry
The words will always stalk me
In the middle of the night
No one knows if I’ll be alright
Under that transparent cloud
It’s always cold
It’s always lonely
No need to flee
It’s the only place
That’s their for me
That frozen sky
Freezing the streets
In which I roam
This is what I call home [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Luka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Frozen Sky

Contributed by Luka on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I act like I’m Happy
Under that frozen sky
It’s like a crystal blanket
Leaving my world dry
The words will always stalk me
In the middle of the night
No one knows if I’ll be alright
Under that transparent cloud
It’s always cold
It’s always lonely
No need to flee
It’s the only place
That’s their for me
That frozen sky
Freezing the streets
In which I roam
This is what I call home

Copyright Â© Luka ... [ 2004-12-16 18:48:59]
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Re: Frozen Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:00:22 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. Keep up the good work.

Re: Frozen Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:31:52 PM AEST
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I was depressed for 8 years... most of my poetry is about gruesome death and such... up to about July 23rd, and still sometimes after... it was at that point, however, that i learned how to look past my frozen sky....

Re: Frozen Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:38:09 PM AEST
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Yeah i have read some of your other stuff and it could have been a bit better but like me i am sure you were uninspired

Re: Frozen Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:53:26 PM AEST
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Nice. Good write.

- Rachelle

Re: Frozen Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Luka on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:25:29 PM AEST
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After re-reading this poem i am going to re-write it and post it again, i feel this could have been such a better poem....thank you all who commented

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