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A Redundancy Finally Avoided
Contributed by
SavingMarion
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:17:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The rapacious halters hang,
Abnormally lifeless,
From your litmus shaded wrists.
They’ve come into their own, I see.
By dropping the sagging bondage,
From your lips,
Pigmented with mortal renitence,
Scores of filthy sorrow,
Could have been avoided.
Had you not picked up,
Your ensanguined ropes,
And fitted your noose’s redundancy,
You would have no debt to settle.
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SavingMarion
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2004-12-16 16:17:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Redundancy Finally Avoided
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:56:19 AM AEST (User
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"Scores of filthy sorrow"
This shows imagination, and ability with the pen/keyboard. Well written.
Welcome to YPDC, by the way. |
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