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The thing inside you.
Contributed by
lunartune
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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The thing inside you.
I have walked and wandered around and around,
this earth searching for the thing that they speak of,
They whisper it form lips to ear,
They speak of it when your not near.
The grayness of the water attacks it,
and the corpses of the dead lack it,
The wind makes it,
and death takes it.
Your eyes are the locks,
and your mind is the key.
Evil thinks it’s good,
good thinks it’s evil,
Most say that it’s the thing that keeps you sane,
others say that you lose your sanity
when you become to true to it.
They say that it is you,
that you are only here because its always with you.
They say that it decorates your fingertips,
it sees through your eyes,
that it is your temper,
your continence,
your love,
that its all of your feelings,
or at least the cause of them,
The thing can be great for some,
and disgusting for others.
They say all of these things about . . . your soul.
They say your soul is this thing inside you.
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Re: The thing inside you.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gemz_World on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 03:01:19 PM AEST (User
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hi, i like ur poem alot, i think it's fantastic and u've got gd talent. Take care and keep up the gd writing, from Gem xx |
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Re: The thing inside you.
(User Rating: 1 ) by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:05:47 PM AEST (User
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You sparked my curiosity with the title and the small intro. I assumed that my expectations would not be met, instead they were exceeded. I was refreshed to read something creative and in depth.
~crumble it all we have only one ounce
savour it
trust nothing but betrayal
we are alone
feelings would die
but death is merely a feeling
capture it
cradle it
it is the only feeling that will keep you alive
we are suffering from human guilt
accident is so much easier
than purpose~weepingprophet
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Re: The thing inside you.
(User Rating: 1 ) by DirkDrab on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:27:26 AM AEST (User
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I like your poem. I have always been told I wear my emotions on my sleave.
I just say that is my soul not just my emotions.
Thanks
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