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Array ( [sid] => 76023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forbidden Love [time] => 2004-12-16 12:54:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take your hands off my heart
and give me the release I need to re-start.
Visit me no more,
inflicting hopes and forbidden love
of never very sure
what we were thinking of.

My friend, my confidant -
Dark fate surrounded us
and all the things once felt free
are now locked away inside of me.

Forbidden love took a bite -
Burned my heart black and bled me white.
Into the pillow I scream at the night
while the candles flicker lifeless silence.

Helplessness binds my hands
in a way I've not felt before
and the trust I relied on
is not there anymore.

Losing touch of you
will be my greatest loss
like breathing in
no air at all.
Love intended pure & clean
will be the worst desolation I've ever seen. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forbidden Love

Contributed by Red_October on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Take your hands off my heart
and give me the release I need to re-start.
Visit me no more,
inflicting hopes and forbidden love
of never very sure
what we were thinking of.

My friend, my confidant -
Dark fate surrounded us
and all the things once felt free
are now locked away inside of me.

Forbidden love took a bite -
Burned my heart black and bled me white.
Into the pillow I scream at the night
while the candles flicker lifeless silence.

Helplessness binds my hands
in a way I've not felt before
and the trust I relied on
is not there anymore.

Losing touch of you
will be my greatest loss
like breathing in
no air at all.
Love intended pure & clean
will be the worst desolation I've ever seen.

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2004-12-16 12:54:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:03:12 PM AEST
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A very emotional write... Forbidden love is always hardest to turn away from.

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Nardo on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:48:02 PM AEST
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You know what I I was thinking? I want to do what Jack Kerouac did, sort of. Just want to go! Write about not what I'm looking at but, what I see and not with physical eyes. Lots of people have done it, so why not me. Do you ever dream about that? It's easy when our monsters are real people. I just might do that! REALLY!

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 03:34:05 PM AEST
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wow what a vivid poem. I enjoyed it there was
a sense of realness and honesty that I am
sure was difficult to convey. Thanks for
sharing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:18:31 PM AEST
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amazingly expressive....i know what you are talking about...

xx Umang xx

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:21:58 AM AEST
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Losing touch of you
will be my greatest loss

The freedom and wisdom you gain will some day feel worth the loss. I know it doesn't feel that way now, but some day it will.
Stitch

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:11:03 AM AEST
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that was brilliant, so powerful.

i like your choice of words, in every poem but in this one particularly

"inflicting hopes" for example.

very good as always, different and outstanding.

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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sweetly sad.

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