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Array ( [sid] => 76019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Good-bye Note [time] => 2004-12-16 12:04:37 [hometext] => Title speaks for itself :( [bodytext] =>

I've been trying so long now
the pain is just to much on my chest.

I keep searching for some kind of happiness
only to have my heart again in arrest.

My family won't even know I'm gone
just one less person for them to harass.

To my beautiful babies
please don't cry, your pain will pass.

I'm so sorry I failed you
just so tired of trying.

The only escape I seen
was in my dreams of me dying.

I'll be reborn someday
maybe this time I can stay.

I LOVE YOU BOTH [comments] => 5 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 36 [informant] => witch_derna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

My Good-bye Note

Contributed by witch_derna on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I've been trying so long now
the pain is just to much on my chest.

I keep searching for some kind of happiness
only to have my heart again in arrest.

My family won't even know I'm gone
just one less person for them to harass.

To my beautiful babies
please don't cry, your pain will pass.

I'm so sorry I failed you
just so tired of trying.

The only escape I seen
was in my dreams of me dying.

I'll be reborn someday
maybe this time I can stay.

I LOVE YOU BOTH

Copyright © witch_derna ... [ 2004-12-16 12:04:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Good-bye Note (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:34:54 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad and full of emotion... Don't ever, ever give up.

Re: My Good-bye Note (User Rating: 1 )
by catharinep on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:30:45 PM AEST
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This poem is written by one in great pain...there is one who is the Light who has the power to change your life around...don't give up, call on the Light...it is as simple as that.

Re: My Good-bye Note (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:33:11 PM AEST
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this is a very emotional poem. you will be missed if you do take your life. God is the way and He is always wanting to help.

this poem was well writing and had a good flow. congratulations on a good write.

just rember that we are all here to help if you need it.

Re: My Good-bye Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:12:12 PM AEST
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this is a heart wrenching write

Re: My Good-bye Note (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:04:53 AM AEST
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Where you go I shall fallow.
You are my only light.
PLEASE DON'T EVER LEAVE MY SIDE.
I LOVE YOU

~~LOVE DENNIS~~

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