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Did I Deserve To Get Hit ?
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:58:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You hit me last night so hard
So hard I seen stars
When the first strike came
I thought ok it's just our game
The next one to follow
Was a bit harder to swallow
Your words of anger and disgrace
As you looked into my face
Your hands tightly wrapped
Around my neck after my face you slapped
When it was all over and done
You said "I'm so sorry hun"
I told you it was alright
I guess I must have deserved it tonight
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witch_derna
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Re: Did I Deserve To Get Hit ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:00:22 PM AEST (User
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Good write, but NO woman deserves this....
Jenni |
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Re: Did I Deserve To Get Hit ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:56:51 PM AEST (User
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I agree no woman deserves that *hugs* a very pained and sad write,
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Re: Did I Deserve To Get Hit ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:09:40 PM AEST (User
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no woman deserves to get hit never |
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Re: Did I Deserve To Get Hit ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by LEMMEN on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:59:26 AM AEST (User
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I'm sorry hun You did not deserve to get hit.
Anger Rage At the thought of you well.
I'M TRULY SORRY.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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