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What do you want?
Contributed by
dalamar
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:22:31 AM in AEST
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My teacher asked me a question one day
He said, “Matt, What do you want?”
I told him that I didn’t know
But when I find out I will tell you
I know what I want now
All I want is to be forgotten
I don’t want people to wait for me
I don’t want people to talk about me
I don’t want people to spend time on me
or even spend any of there money
And most of all I don’t want People
To cry for me when I am gone.
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dalamar
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2004-12-16 09:22:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What do you want?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:22:02 PM AEST (User
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very well written...I like the idea of starting with a little story about your teacher and turning it into a poem...it's kind of sad though
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Re: What do you want?
(User Rating: 1 ) by givingin on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:47:45 AM AEST (User
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Good poem hun.
But I will cry when your gone.
Sometimes we don't feel loved, we feel that no one cares, sometimes we don't want to care, all we want to do is give in. But remember, people do care and will cry when your gone.
*~givingin~* |
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