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[title] => Simulation
[time] => 2002-07-19 18:48:58
[hometext] => This is the newest poem i've written and I wrote it just today. It also happens to bethe first thing I'm submitting on here. I'm a young writer looking for criticism so please email me with what you think (hellion666@ikillclowns.com)
[bodytext] => Simulation
Poison drifting through my veins Evil bonding me in chains Unforgiving, rancid minds None of life was ever kind Digesting what is left of you Soon my pain better be through Always hating what I am Thinking up some awful scam Never wanting more than this Without you, life will be bliss Forgotten by the unforgiven Always hating the world I live in Scorning more than I should Living underneath the hood Under the hood where darkness reigns Under darkness I shall remain Inside my world, my world of fear Inside my heart I shed a tear A tear of hate toward all of you A tear of light to get me through A simple mind can change a life A simple hand with a simple knife Simplicity will kill us all Simplicity will make us fall I’m left alone in my own mess Left alone under the reign of darkness In the shadow of darkness I see a light But nothing now is worth the fight [comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sublimination [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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