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Array ( [sid] => 75973 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confusing [time] => 2004-12-16 00:25:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => your a crack head and i hate you
you never cease to make me sick
and soon I'll be long gone
I dont care where you put your dick
Ruin another life
they'll see when its too late
that you could never take care of a baby
but you want to procreate
all you care about is drugs
you've fooled your friends and you family
but when your living on the streets again
it wont be hard to see

You beat your girlfriends cuz your not a man
youve put them all through hell
you know you ruined my life
when you ***** me in that sleezy cheap motel
oh what a story to tell your kids
you got their mother high, now your convicted
you knew she couldnt say no to drugs
it made easier to deny you were addicted

you dragged her into your *****ty life,
so you could have the upper hand
but you cant own up to your problems
and you'll never understand
one day your going to die lonely
because you cant respect those that you love
and I'll wonder why i wasted my time
and you'll realize what your life is devoid of

Nobody can help you
you cant help yourself
you'll always be a liar
and I shouldnt have felt pain
and I shouldnt have been sad
I should have set my standards higher

I could try and try to show you your wrong
and you should care, til I'm blue in the face
but your never going to care
and you'll never see
that your stuck in a horrible place

a place with no feelings
no conscience, compassion
where sadness is fought with your ego attacking
I hope one day you'll see how much you are lacking

until the i'm left pregant
and your never going to give a *****
just send me away
so you dont have to deal with it

its not fair im a women
and the baby's in me
I wish i could walk away
but it just aint that easy

and your a man
so its okay to just get up and leave
or send me away
and I'm left to greive

and I'm left to worry
is the baby going to live?
its going to to come out deformed
from all the drugs that I did?
they say time heals all wounds
but this ones sticking with me
this too shall not pass
cuz god's ignoring my plea




[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 6 [informant] => confusingmess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
confusing

Contributed by confusingmess on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 12:25:34 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



your a crack head and i hate you
you never cease to make me sick
and soon I'll be long gone
I dont care where you put your dick
Ruin another life
they'll see when its too late
that you could never take care of a baby
but you want to procreate
all you care about is drugs
you've fooled your friends and you family
but when your living on the streets again
it wont be hard to see

You beat your girlfriends cuz your not a man
youve put them all through hell
you know you ruined my life
when you ***** me in that sleezy cheap motel
oh what a story to tell your kids
you got their mother high, now your convicted
you knew she couldnt say no to drugs
it made easier to deny you were addicted

you dragged her into your *****ty life,
so you could have the upper hand
but you cant own up to your problems
and you'll never understand
one day your going to die lonely
because you cant respect those that you love
and I'll wonder why i wasted my time
and you'll realize what your life is devoid of

Nobody can help you
you cant help yourself
you'll always be a liar
and I shouldnt have felt pain
and I shouldnt have been sad
I should have set my standards higher

I could try and try to show you your wrong
and you should care, til I'm blue in the face
but your never going to care
and you'll never see
that your stuck in a horrible place

a place with no feelings
no conscience, compassion
where sadness is fought with your ego attacking
I hope one day you'll see how much you are lacking

until the i'm left pregant
and your never going to give a *****
just send me away
so you dont have to deal with it

its not fair im a women
and the baby's in me
I wish i could walk away
but it just aint that easy

and your a man
so its okay to just get up and leave
or send me away
and I'm left to greive

and I'm left to worry
is the baby going to live?
its going to to come out deformed
from all the drugs that I did?
they say time heals all wounds
but this ones sticking with me
this too shall not pass
cuz god's ignoring my plea








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Re: confusing (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:39:08 AM AEST
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you know your blaming your ex for this *****ty life you have, but you didn't have to participate in whatever it was that was going on. yeah he probably wasn't the best influence, but you probably already knew this; and you still stuck around. you need to take responsibilty for your own actions!!!

DR

P.S. nice write by the way


Re: confusing (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:16:19 AM AEST
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there ALOT of anger here. i hope it made you feel better writing about this.




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