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Array ( [sid] => 75940 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Home [time] => 2004-12-15 19:14:19 [hometext] => Okay, this is supposed to be about social anxiety, about individuality and ignoring worldly requirements. Remember to always be yourself, and never let the opinions of others affect your view on people or life in general. Never change who you are! [bodytext] => Captious stares rapture your thoughts,
Thoughts of expatriation that have been festering at the back of your mind...
Feelings of disapproval and acceptance lock you in your own hideaway,
Trapping you between the thin lines of reality and the pretense world you have created for your refuge...
Your desire for the comfort of people fades away,
Your own thoughts and wishful daydreams lulling you into the solitary depths of your mind...
You are safe
You are beautiful
You are loved
But as your physical form ages, you are still an innocent in your mind, your home...
The real world begins to drag you back, pulling you into its dark abyss of hate and critical requirements...
The world as you know it is falling apart
Taking you with it along with all of the iniquities
When it all comes crashing down,
Where is your beautiful place?
Where is your home?
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 48 [informant] => AKA_Anonymous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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Contributed by AKA_Anonymous on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:14:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Captious stares rapture your thoughts,
Thoughts of expatriation that have been festering at the back of your mind...
Feelings of disapproval and acceptance lock you in your own hideaway,
Trapping you between the thin lines of reality and the pretense world you have created for your refuge...
Your desire for the comfort of people fades away,
Your own thoughts and wishful daydreams lulling you into the solitary depths of your mind...
You are safe
You are beautiful
You are loved
But as your physical form ages, you are still an innocent in your mind, your home...
The real world begins to drag you back, pulling you into its dark abyss of hate and critical requirements...
The world as you know it is falling apart
Taking you with it along with all of the iniquities
When it all comes crashing down,
Where is your beautiful place?
Where is your home?




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Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:22:42 PM AEST
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::cries:: i loved it truly loved it
*athena


Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:32:37 PM AEST
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Hey! Get out of my head!
:-)
Seriously though, this is a really good write.
Thanks.
And welcome to YPDC.


Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST
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wow, this is beautiful, well done!!!


Re: Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:03:30 PM AEST
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My home? dunno. really great write.you are really talented even if its your first poem
welcome to ypdc

i was 14 when i started im 15 now

so enjoy your stay

Dan666




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