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Array ( [sid] => 75853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This drug, This poison, My saviour [time] => 2004-12-15 07:21:44 [hometext] => *~Something that is based on reality, yet not... its kind of confusing (not the poem [bodytext] => All of these words of hate,
all of these strong emotions,
I don’t know what to do with them now that you’re gone.
Drifting into the darkness,
the darkness of life,
I change my appearance,
I change my life.
How did you do this to me,
I never fall for anybody,
but this is a different case.
Something that I never thought would happen.
With this blade, and with this toke,
I unravel my pain.
This drug amongst this paper,
makes me feel so good inside,
it makes me think of happier times.
This drug, this poison, my saviour...
Toke by toke, everything becomes a blur,
flashes of light, speeding past my head,
Why do I do this to myself,
Why can’t I just take the pain of this reality?!
Days go by, day by day,
each day with a thought of you,
but by using this drug, this poison, my saviour,
Each memory dwindles to nothing,
no memory of my past pains...
No memory of our past love...
This drug, this poison, my saviour,
is taking my life away,
yet it’s keeping me here... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Deathly_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

This drug, This poison, My saviour

Contributed by Deathly_Rose on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

All of these words of hate,
all of these strong emotions,
I don’t know what to do with them now that you’re gone.
Drifting into the darkness,
the darkness of life,
I change my appearance,
I change my life.
How did you do this to me,
I never fall for anybody,
but this is a different case.
Something that I never thought would happen.
With this blade, and with this toke,
I unravel my pain.
This drug amongst this paper,
makes me feel so good inside,
it makes me think of happier times.
This drug, this poison, my saviour...
Toke by toke, everything becomes a blur,
flashes of light, speeding past my head,
Why do I do this to myself,
Why can’t I just take the pain of this reality?!
Days go by, day by day,
each day with a thought of you,
but by using this drug, this poison, my saviour,
Each memory dwindles to nothing,
no memory of my past pains...
No memory of our past love...
This drug, this poison, my saviour,
is taking my life away,
yet it’s keeping me here...

Copyright Â© Deathly_Rose ... [ 2004-12-15 07:21:44]
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Re: This drug, This poison, My saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:34:50 AM AEST
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I know you don't like when people say this, but you know I'm telling the truth when I say...
I do know how you feel. Being best friends, we kinda get mixed in with the same things sometimes.
Great write,
this brought what the drug does for me more into sight.
MUAh love you!

*~givingin~*

Re: This drug, This poison, My saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:51:34 PM AEST
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ooooh this hit me hard I can so relate to this
it's kind of creepy. The poem was my life like a year and a half ago. What a great poem so
very strong and chilling.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: This drug, This poison, My saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:08:08 PM AEST
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good write been awhile since i gotta toke but thats a long story i wanna toke again to lose the pain and forget it all even tho itll be waitin for me too come down

Re: This drug, This poison, My saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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using this drug my poison my saviour.....
classic
beautiful and deep.

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