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Brought me down on my knees,
The way you kissed me was mind blowing,
All this time I spent not knowing.

That love could feel this good,
My last relationship drew so much blood,
You gave me something to cherish,
Even in time it will not perish.

You swept across me like a secret wind,
Now to your heavenly body I cling,
Hoping that forever with me you will stay,
I hope another gust of wind doesn’t sweep you away.

Around you I feel so relaxed & calm,
I know with you I will come to no harm,
When you hold me I feel myself fall,
Deeper in love as your soul calls.

Your heart is soft & your heart is pure,
I’d never known a love like this before,
Before you drifted into my life & my heart,
Thank you for loving me right from the start.

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Gentle Breeze

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You came to me on a gentle breeze,
Brought me down on my knees,
The way you kissed me was mind blowing,
All this time I spent not knowing.

That love could feel this good,
My last relationship drew so much blood,
You gave me something to cherish,
Even in time it will not perish.

You swept across me like a secret wind,
Now to your heavenly body I cling,
Hoping that forever with me you will stay,
I hope another gust of wind doesn’t sweep you away.

Around you I feel so relaxed & calm,
I know with you I will come to no harm,
When you hold me I feel myself fall,
Deeper in love as your soul calls.

Your heart is soft & your heart is pure,
I’d never known a love like this before,
Before you drifted into my life & my heart,
Thank you for loving me right from the start.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-12-14 19:08:09]
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Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by BennyJay on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:10:27 PM AEST
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whoa thats really good!

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:14:11 PM AEST
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So sweet! Thanks for lifting up my day =)

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:14:33 PM AEST
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Woah so beautiful..tenderness flowed in waves from such wonderous words... I am glad you have some to love you...it is a good feeling aye...lol oneday I might even be lucky to know that feeling...pity the poor person that fall in love with an unlikely souls such as mine :D

Peace be with ya Pix
Hugs
Karl

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:43:10 PM AEST
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When you write of love ... you hold nothing back . Well really, you hold nothing back when you write, period. Of love ... of depression ... of anything. You have a knack for capturing whatever you feel and pulling your reader right in there next to you.

I love it !!

Nazzy ~

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:45:59 PM AEST
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so sweet and beautiful...so I see I am not the only one in love....Very good Pixie....Shari

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:04:03 PM AEST
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Very romantic and positive. Nice flow

Wonderful write
Willofree

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:36:42 PM AEST
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sweet and tender, pixie!

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:25:37 AM AEST
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Aww pixie that is so romantic and beautiful.
I love this poem.I think i will save it. :)

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:53:42 AM AEST
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OMG that was just beautiful, it was so romantic, sweet, loving and tender at the same time. Thanks for sharing this Pix.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:26:22 AM AEST
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Oh, that was so great pixie, I loved it,
your so talented.
It was so romantic,
* sigh...*
it was beautiful : )

*~givingin~*

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 08:44:21 AM AEST
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Absoulutely amazing! This poem reflects the kind of love that makes you want to go on living. There's only one word that can truly describe your work, Pixie, and that is... INSPIRED!!!

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