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Array ( [sid] => 75707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why do I still love you!? [time] => 2004-12-14 07:38:24 [hometext] => I was so young when he hurt me, as I see him each day, I know the pain and love will never go away..... [bodytext] => Bleeding as I cry,
I sit and think of you,
I wish you would come back.,
I love you, I LOVE YOU!
Why did you leave me?
I couldn’t keep it a secret...
I had to tell my mother,
what we were doing was wrong,
I was young, you were older,
I loved you! You made me this way!
You told me all the things I wanted to hear,
you said you’d never leave me!
You said if I told, it would be my fault,
that my family and friends would hate me!
How could you betray me like that!
I’m so broken and torn inside,
I haven’t recovered for over 9 years!
I was so young!!!
I hate you! I hate you!

Still I love you so much!........ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => givingin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Why do I still love you!?

Contributed by givingin on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Bleeding as I cry,
I sit and think of you,
I wish you would come back.,
I love you, I LOVE YOU!
Why did you leave me?
I couldn’t keep it a secret...
I had to tell my mother,
what we were doing was wrong,
I was young, you were older,
I loved you! You made me this way!
You told me all the things I wanted to hear,
you said you’d never leave me!
You said if I told, it would be my fault,
that my family and friends would hate me!
How could you betray me like that!
I’m so broken and torn inside,
I haven’t recovered for over 9 years!
I was so young!!!
I hate you! I hate you!

Still I love you so much!........

Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-12-14 07:38:24]
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Re: Why do I still love you!? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:39:55 AM AEST
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that was very moving, very sad and painful to write I imagine *hugs*
pixie xx

Re: Why do I still love you!? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:46:02 AM AEST
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riddled with so much pain, though I am confused why put your self through so much agony, knowing the paint and torment he put you through by leaving...
but who am I to judge...just a reader moved by your intense poetry...beautiful yet so sad...I hope you are able to find some happiness somewhere.

Re: Why do I still love you!? (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:08:46 PM AEST
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This is a deep innervision
I'm always here for you if you
whenever you need a soothing Wind......

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