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If I Vanished
Contributed by
witch_derna
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:44:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If I vanished who would know?
How can they miss something
they don't even see now?
Sometimes I close my eyes
to imagine being gone
away from pain, away from life.
I seem to be sinking
more and more each day
darkness just seems to be lingering.
Sinking deeper in depression
sinking deeper in debt
living is no longer a passion.
Restless again tonight
wondering who I matter to
who will cry when I'm out of sight?
I feel myself slipping
from this life to the next.
If I vanished, who would know?
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witch_derna
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2004-12-14 06:44:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If I Vanished
(User Rating: 1 ) by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:27:55 AM AEST (User
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I CARE I WOULD KNOW I LOVE YOU MORE THAN LIFE IT'S SELF NEVER LEAVE FOR I WOULD FALLOW AS WELL.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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Re: If I Vanished
(User Rating: 1 ) by givingin on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:52:20 AM AEST (User
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Very sad,
I may not know you, but,
if you ever did diapear, I'm sure that there would be people in this world who would miss you very much.
It seems to me like DENNIS loves you so very much, I sure with his help you'll find that people do care, no matter what theysay or how they act...
MUAH
take care
*~givingin~~* |
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Re: If I Vanished
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:57:32 PM AEST (User
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i feel this way sometimes and im sure others do as well.....im sure you will be missed....you ahve a great talent....excellent poem...i liked it alot
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: If I Vanished
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfman on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:33:40 PM AEST (User
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I know how it feels to have these thoughts goijng through your mind, but for me its alot harder, I have no one to hold when I am alone. but when I think I've reached my end I find one more small thing to live for.
please dont let go, you will be missed more then you know.
this poem was very touching and it seems to have alot of heart writen in it please keep writing and poesting for every one here at your YPDC family. |
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