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Array ( [sid] => 75674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unspoken Love [time] => 2004-12-13 22:31:06 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to a very special person who doesn't know just how much he means to me. [bodytext] => I’ve thought of so many ways
to tell you that I care,
notes, calls, e-mails,
This is so unfair

I love you but I can’t tell you
I’m scared of what you’ll say
so I hide my feelings from you
each and every day

I’ve dreamed so many times
of how awesome it would feel
to have your arms around me
sometimes it seems so real

If I told you how I feel
how would you react?
Would you be happy that I told you
or be scared to face the fact?

I see you with her
and I just fall apart
a tear comes to my eye
and a crack goes through my heart

I wish I could get over this
I just need a little shove
to find the courage to tell you
about my unspoken love [comments] => 7 [counter] => 620 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Unspoken_Love [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Unspoken Love

Contributed by Unspoken_Love on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:31:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I’ve thought of so many ways
to tell you that I care,
notes, calls, e-mails,
This is so unfair

I love you but I can’t tell you
I’m scared of what you’ll say
so I hide my feelings from you
each and every day

I’ve dreamed so many times
of how awesome it would feel
to have your arms around me
sometimes it seems so real

If I told you how I feel
how would you react?
Would you be happy that I told you
or be scared to face the fact?

I see you with her
and I just fall apart
a tear comes to my eye
and a crack goes through my heart

I wish I could get over this
I just need a little shove
to find the courage to tell you
about my unspoken love




Copyright © Unspoken_Love ... [ 2004-12-13 22:31:06]
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Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:10:34 PM AEST
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aww this is a really sweet poem... you should just tell him straight up and make him know.... Ive went through that before... but its a good write and good luck with it

~karmen


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:00:12 AM AEST
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oh! my oh! my.............. u hav written my heart feelings tht i feel 4 my beloved.....ur poem is really amzing .... u know but i lost her .. anyway dont wait 4 his perposal just go & ask him how much u love him...ok
WISH U GOOD LUCK
hav hugzzz,smiles & fun
HOT-SHOT


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:25:51 AM AEST
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I love you but I can’t tell you.....
Don't be afraid just tell him. Maybe he has the same feelings as you just afraid to say. Great write.
Many Blessings.
MaDonna


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DanishPoet on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:21:41 PM AEST
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The worst part is always that you know what to do...
The second worst part is that you know what the consquenses (how to be spelled?) might be ...
-Good luck. Well written.

Toke


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 06:33:53 PM AEST
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I know how you feel... Well, obviously not exactly but I have to deal with a similar problem as well. Sorry, I at least know that it hurts.


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 10:48:34 PM AEST
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wow...i can relate to that in so many ways..i wish i woulda wrote it! lol, awesome write, i really love it!


Re: Unspoken Love (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:08:19 PM AEST
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Wow great write..I think that just about everyone can relate to this..its such a terrifying yet wonderful feeling..great job!




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