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Array ( [sid] => 75670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye my love. [time] => 2004-12-13 22:06:34 [hometext] => I wrote this for my fiance who died...i lost it till now i wanted to post it... please comment [bodytext] => Never thought the day would come,
when you would say goodbye.
Never thought the time would come,
when you'd leave me here to cry.

All my friends say I'm doing just fine,
because the smile is there for them to find.
but deep down I'm falling apart.
no laughter can mend this broken heart.

When we said nothing at all
every kiss and every touch
each that said so much.
Are now nothing more than memories.
locked away in our time.

How do I live like this?
Without my lover, my friend, my whole life.
Our dreams and plans dies with you.
yet you sill live in my heart.

I'll never doubt that we were meant to be.
Your love was the one thing that set me free.
Now this broken heart must say goodbye..
and wipe the tears i cry for you...
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 52 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Goodbye my love.

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:06:34 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Never thought the day would come,
when you would say goodbye.
Never thought the time would come,
when you'd leave me here to cry.

All my friends say I'm doing just fine,
because the smile is there for them to find.
but deep down I'm falling apart.
no laughter can mend this broken heart.

When we said nothing at all
every kiss and every touch
each that said so much.
Are now nothing more than memories.
locked away in our time.

How do I live like this?
Without my lover, my friend, my whole life.
Our dreams and plans dies with you.
yet you sill live in my heart.

I'll never doubt that we were meant to be.
Your love was the one thing that set me free.
Now this broken heart must say goodbye..
and wipe the tears i cry for you...

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-12-13 22:06:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye my love. (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:20:45 PM AEST
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Very sad, but very good. I wish you the best.

Re: Goodbye my love. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:23:17 PM AEST
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sad... i'm so sorry this had to happen... great write...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes

Re: Goodbye my love. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:35:37 AM AEST
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this was very moving and emotional, great write,

pixie xx

Re: Goodbye my love. (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:52:20 AM AEST
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I am very sorry for what happened to you! i feel deaply! your poem was amazing and showed your true emotions!
It was a really good write! Keep it up
JenJen
xxx

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