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Ever expanding forever growing never ending
Stars planets and galexies
Earths star eternaly warming
On it's backside hurles an astroid unseen and unknown
Astranomical in size and porportion
For millions of years it's course stayed behind our sun
To the outer extent of the universe always to return
Today beknown to no one it passes by a sun storm
Super flares more powerful than our necular bomb
Nudging altering this astroids course
Pointing it on a course towards earth
Still on the backside it is now set to pass over the face of our star
Sciencest notice a black dot moving across the sun only to dismiss as a flare cloud
It circles the sun again taking a few months to return
Scientest are puzzled and watch to learn
By their tellescopes they watch notice it has a distink wobble
They guestimate it to be about four miles long with it's thickness about two miles
My God it's trying to break out of it's orbit
Contact the President
Contact Nasa
The President goes before Congress
Appropreations are put in place
The President notifies Russia China and Europe
The enormuse astroid breaks it's orbit and could be headed towards earth
Militaries around the world are put on alert
Everywhere scienctest scurry at work
A few months passed
Then one night the moon turned blood red
There was fire in the sky
Around the world having everybodys eye
The masses were scared
Martial law declared
Goverments told their populas not to worry
Sicencetest hurried
Missels pointed heavenward
Armies alerted the masses scared
The world is coming to an end
Lord lord forgive my sin
Each night the sky turned redder
brighter
The heavens were on fire
The shuttle was launched unmaned to strike the astroid in hopes of changing it's path
Around earth thousands were choosing death
Fear was now everywhere
Peoples were now finally told to seek shelter
The shuttle strike was usless
Like a pingpong ball hitting a mattress
Night time was as bright as day almost
The astroid was now determided to strike in the Alantic somewhere around the Iceland coast
Days grew warmer
Nights hotter
The sky was burning
It's the second coming
Projected just right
The astroid hit the north Alantic ice
The earth shook at it's foundation
The President gave his last presentation
Leave your homes go inland
Then he headed with goverment members to the Airizona under ground provision
People everywhere paniced
Surerside was titanic
An enormus mushroom cloud blackened the entire earth
Masses sufered radiation sickness
Tidal waves covered England Japan and other island nations
Inland states were lost such as Michigan
To darkness the world sucomed
Humans returned to cannabalism
Congress and the President because of lack of food came out of their Airizona hole
Seeing bones of death and nothing left to rule






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Out Of The Darkness

Contributed by Sinned on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional



Out Of The Darkness


Ever expanding forever growing never ending
Stars planets and galexies
Earths star eternaly warming
On it's backside hurles an astroid unseen and unknown
Astranomical in size and porportion
For millions of years it's course stayed behind our sun
To the outer extent of the universe always to return
Today beknown to no one it passes by a sun storm
Super flares more powerful than our necular bomb
Nudging altering this astroids course
Pointing it on a course towards earth
Still on the backside it is now set to pass over the face of our star
Sciencest notice a black dot moving across the sun only to dismiss as a flare cloud
It circles the sun again taking a few months to return
Scientest are puzzled and watch to learn
By their tellescopes they watch notice it has a distink wobble
They guestimate it to be about four miles long with it's thickness about two miles
My God it's trying to break out of it's orbit
Contact the President
Contact Nasa
The President goes before Congress
Appropreations are put in place
The President notifies Russia China and Europe
The enormuse astroid breaks it's orbit and could be headed towards earth
Militaries around the world are put on alert
Everywhere scienctest scurry at work
A few months passed
Then one night the moon turned blood red
There was fire in the sky
Around the world having everybodys eye
The masses were scared
Martial law declared
Goverments told their populas not to worry
Sicencetest hurried
Missels pointed heavenward
Armies alerted the masses scared
The world is coming to an end
Lord lord forgive my sin
Each night the sky turned redder
brighter
The heavens were on fire
The shuttle was launched unmaned to strike the astroid in hopes of changing it's path
Around earth thousands were choosing death
Fear was now everywhere
Peoples were now finally told to seek shelter
The shuttle strike was usless
Like a pingpong ball hitting a mattress
Night time was as bright as day almost
The astroid was now determided to strike in the Alantic somewhere around the Iceland coast
Days grew warmer
Nights hotter
The sky was burning
It's the second coming
Projected just right
The astroid hit the north Alantic ice
The earth shook at it's foundation
The President gave his last presentation
Leave your homes go inland
Then he headed with goverment members to the Airizona under ground provision
People everywhere paniced
Surerside was titanic
An enormus mushroom cloud blackened the entire earth
Masses sufered radiation sickness
Tidal waves covered England Japan and other island nations
Inland states were lost such as Michigan
To darkness the world sucomed
Humans returned to cannabalism
Congress and the President because of lack of food came out of their Airizona hole
Seeing bones of death and nothing left to rule










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Re: Out Of The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:40:55 PM AEST
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Very strong and intense piece


Re: Out Of The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:51:51 PM AEST
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the interesting thing about this piece is it most likely well happen not too long from now. i agree with patrick on this one. excellently done.




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