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Array ( [sid] => 75664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Familiar Cry [time] => 2004-12-13 21:17:37 [hometext] => This is actually a dream I had. So I write about it here. [bodytext] => In a distance I hear a cry
I follow the pain, the weeps of sorrow
Passing emptiness as I go a wondering by,
In hopes that I'll reach what I choose to follow.
But as I continue towards the cry
I notice that I felt it too.
Felt as if though, it was mine
Now pondering on what to do.
Should I go, or should I stay?
Again, I hear the cry, but louder
As I begin to tear, I look for a way
In which I'll try to find her.
Even though now knowing
the cry that was much like mine
I continue on forth going
by seeing her, her pain in my mind.
I open my eyes to all but a dream
of a girl who cried of suffering
just like I me, now clear to see
the cry was from the very own....me


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Familiar Cry

Contributed by Artemis03 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In a distance I hear a cry
I follow the pain, the weeps of sorrow
Passing emptiness as I go a wondering by,
In hopes that I'll reach what I choose to follow.
But as I continue towards the cry
I notice that I felt it too.
Felt as if though, it was mine
Now pondering on what to do.
Should I go, or should I stay?
Again, I hear the cry, but louder
As I begin to tear, I look for a way
In which I'll try to find her.
Even though now knowing
the cry that was much like mine
I continue on forth going
by seeing her, her pain in my mind.
I open my eyes to all but a dream
of a girl who cried of suffering
just like I me, now clear to see
the cry was from the very own....me






Copyright © Artemis03 ... [ 2004-12-13 21:17:37]
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Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:21:05 PM AEST
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::snaps:: so deep...wow...
its like seeing your self in a miror
very good write...
*athena


Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:30:39 PM AEST
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very good write. well written. i just wish this had a more original ending. ive read almost four thousand poems on this site, and the same type ending just becomes boring. its a good twist to have, but overused. and many great poets were famous for not only their style, but their originality.


Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:03:39 PM AEST
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very cool dark poem, I like it.


Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:20:31 PM AEST
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very disturbing....well done.
its self realising. good job
luv rach


Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:44:40 PM AEST
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i liked this...it was quite interesting....great write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Familiar Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:05:26 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.......what else can I say....




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