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Array ( [sid] => 75620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Consuming my body [time] => 2004-12-13 16:44:54 [hometext] => *Please Comment* [bodytext] => I can't control it.....
This anger coursing through my veins faster than my blood can flow.
I'm powerless against my agony,
Beating faster than my heart in my chest.
I want it to end more than anyone could know,
For it's draining my body faster than death itself.
I wish once more to feel my heart leap with joy,
Filled with the passion of love.
Instead it sinks even deeper into my chest,
Fearing what every new day has in store.
I wish it would all just leave me,
Like a baby bird leaving the nest to start it's own life.
I know it shall be the death of me,
Because it's consuming my whole body. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Apolla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Consuming my body

Contributed by Apolla on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:44:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I can't control it.....
This anger coursing through my veins faster than my blood can flow.
I'm powerless against my agony,
Beating faster than my heart in my chest.
I want it to end more than anyone could know,
For it's draining my body faster than death itself.
I wish once more to feel my heart leap with joy,
Filled with the passion of love.
Instead it sinks even deeper into my chest,
Fearing what every new day has in store.
I wish it would all just leave me,
Like a baby bird leaving the nest to start it's own life.
I know it shall be the death of me,
Because it's consuming my whole body.

Copyright © Apolla ... [ 2004-12-13 16:44:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Consuming my body (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:48:23 PM AEST
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wow thats really deep...its
so true though, anger can
eat away at you like that...believe
me i know...great write!
*athena

Re: Consuming my body (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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It sometimes makes me cry to read about the truth I don't see in you everyday..and sometimes it reassures me because I can relate from skin to heart. Just like all..another beautiful write.

Re: Consuming my body (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:43:19 AM AEST
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a deep write, I can relate to this, anger is such a powerful emotion it will destroy you if you let it *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: Consuming my body (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:34:48 AM AEST
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Great write *Smiles* I knew you were a good poet hee hee

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Consuming my body (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:48:36 AM AEST
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Anger Written very well Good job.

~DENNIS~

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