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Array ( [sid] => 7562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => For Cindy-Louanne [time] => 2002-11-27 16:20:00 [hometext] => This was one of the first poems I wrote. It was one of those occasions when the words just seem to flow. It was natural, passionate, and cataclysmic just like my love for the woman who has reminded me just how wonderful life can be. Thanks, Cindy. [bodytext] => Cindy-Lou with the auburn hair,
With the dark blue carpet and the creaky stair,
And the broken drawer with the forks and knives,
Have we know each other in different lives?
If I thought your love for me would fade,
I’d give up drinking orangeade,
And climbing on my motor bike,
To the seaside I would take a hike
I’d crank the throttle very hard,
And ensure I’d got my donor’s card,
I’d race across the grass with haste,
And find the very highest place
Then gazing up into the sky
I’d see my life go flashing by
Tumbling over very slow
To land upon the rocks below
For you see my dear I could not bear
To suffer any more despair
And if I thought I’d hurt your pretty heart,
My life would be worthless from the start
So please believe me when I say
You’re the brightness in my day
And say you’ll love me for ever more
And that we’ll go together to heaven’s door.

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For Cindy-Louanne

Contributed by Eastway on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Cindy-Lou with the auburn hair,
With the dark blue carpet and the creaky stair,
And the broken drawer with the forks and knives,
Have we know each other in different lives?
If I thought your love for me would fade,
I’d give up drinking orangeade,
And climbing on my motor bike,
To the seaside I would take a hike
I’d crank the throttle very hard,
And ensure I’d got my donor’s card,
I’d race across the grass with haste,
And find the very highest place
Then gazing up into the sky
I’d see my life go flashing by
Tumbling over very slow
To land upon the rocks below
For you see my dear I could not bear
To suffer any more despair
And if I thought I’d hurt your pretty heart,
My life would be worthless from the start
So please believe me when I say
You’re the brightness in my day
And say you’ll love me for ever more
And that we’ll go together to heaven’s door.

Copyright Â© Eastway ... [ 2002-11-27 16:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: For Cindy-Louanne (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 04:29:25 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful expression
of how you feel for this woman, i hope
she see's this. Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: For Cindy-Louanne (User Rating: 1 )
by Septic on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:37:21 AM AEST
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Hey Eastway,
You know that this one had me in tears the first time I read it ! It's beautiful just like you. I'll love you forever. Thankyou! forever...XXXX

Re: For Cindy-Louanne (User Rating: 1 )
by Septic on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:37:36 AM AEST
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Hey Eastway,
You know that this one had me in tears the first time I read it ! It's beautiful just like you. I'll love you forever. Thankyou!.XXXX

Re: For Cindy-Louanne (User Rating: 1 )
by Septic on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:37:40 AM AEST
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Hey Eastway,
You know that this one had me in tears the first time I read it ! It's beautiful just like you. I'll love you forever. Thankyou!.XXXX

Re: For Cindy-Louanne (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 02:25:15 PM AEST
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Nice couplets! Smooth as silk.
Regards,
Ramfire

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