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[aid] => mick
[title] => puked on poem
[time] => 2004-12-13 14:21:10
[hometext] => the rhyme scheme is really messed up on this poem, it needs a little work. Its pretty much about being an alcoholic. one night i came home drunk and I wrote for a bit and fell asleep, then woke up and threw up all over my writing books.
[bodytext] => Deflowered virgin once Such a pure reflection in his eyes If he uncovered all the skeletons And all your lies he would despise Respect isn’t measured in numbers Unless your counting the actions No disrespect, its ten to one And I think your bags need packing A symbol of your youth and what you once stood for Before being thrown in the snake pit With labels slut ***** whore Living for the reflection So she can illuminate their time with me Wasted time Useless stress on a one way street of wasted energy Its like being chased in a dream But I freeze or move I’m weak Curled up in a little ball Mouth is open but I cant speak Change change please change for me Promises never seriously took Its hard for me to put time in this I got drunk and threw up on my book full of promises Its time to change but I don’t know how Just write these wishes fake pledges No good intensions But its what I allow Deflowered virgin once Dogmatic eyes please look away Parasites cant feed off of me I’m tainted and you are cliché [comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 66 [informant] => briefcircle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
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