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Waiting for you to return from afar,
I love to pass the time just swinging,
Knowing that to me you’ll be soon bringing.

Bringing back to me your love,
Placing me back on my heavenly dove,
Among the doves, the stars & you,
How can a girl ever feel blue?

The stars twinkle as I pass them by,
They tell me I have no need to cry,
Because my love will come back to me soon,
Then my heart can continue its happy tune.

I look all around & I see such beauty & light,
It makes me think I’ve finally done something right,
I see the earth far below my feet,
Watching lovers as the secretly meet.

It reminds me of how we used to be,
I never thought you’d end up with me,
I am so glad that we found our way to each other,
Mark to me you are much more than just my lover.

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Swinging On The Stars

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:49:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Here I am swinging on the stars,
Waiting for you to return from afar,
I love to pass the time just swinging,
Knowing that to me you’ll be soon bringing.

Bringing back to me your love,
Placing me back on my heavenly dove,
Among the doves, the stars & you,
How can a girl ever feel blue?

The stars twinkle as I pass them by,
They tell me I have no need to cry,
Because my love will come back to me soon,
Then my heart can continue its happy tune.

I look all around & I see such beauty & light,
It makes me think I’ve finally done something right,
I see the earth far below my feet,
Watching lovers as the secretly meet.

It reminds me of how we used to be,
I never thought you’d end up with me,
I am so glad that we found our way to each other,
Mark to me you are much more than just my lover.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-12-13 13:49:29]
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Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:52:37 PM AEST
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Hunny,
*hugs you*
This is so incredibly amazingly adorable!
I love this so much!
WOW this is just incredible!
*hugs you*

love
Gen xx

Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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Nice write...beautiful...

xxUmangxx

Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:54:33 PM AEST
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Wow this is such a beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:15:11 PM AEST
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You've commented on some of my poems so I thought to repay the favor. It's a beautiful poem through and through.

Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:33:09 PM AEST
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SO much heart and love..........What a beautiful write.! Thanks for sharing!~

Re: Swinging On The Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 04:29:11 AM AEST
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everytime i read your poems i'm never disappointed and i'm not disappointed this time either. sweety this is jus magnificent!
much luv*hugs* *smiles*

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