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Array ( [sid] => 75565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Date Long Past [time] => 2004-12-13 09:22:28 [hometext] => Vampire poem. Based on something happening in my novel. [bodytext] =>



Lurking within the shadows
she never sought to care.
Never had she any reason to,
she never thought to dare.

They always assumed her odd,
oh, yet they were blind.
She was just that bit more different
So much more than their kind.

So unaware was he,
that she smited him.
Betrayed her Sire, killed his kindred
She tore those men limb from limb.

She then took her siblings and fled,
both out of fright and out of fear.
She angered him to the very core,
and she did this without a tear.

Three thousand years long past;
no longer can they dance around their fate.
Within the shadows can she no longer hide.
She prepares for their impending fight date. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Angelic_Demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Date Long Past

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:22:28 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry







Lurking within the shadows
she never sought to care.
Never had she any reason to,
she never thought to dare.

They always assumed her odd,
oh, yet they were blind.
She was just that bit more different
So much more than their kind.

So unaware was he,
that she smited him.
Betrayed her Sire, killed his kindred
She tore those men limb from limb.

She then took her siblings and fled,
both out of fright and out of fear.
She angered him to the very core,
and she did this without a tear.

Three thousand years long past;
no longer can they dance around their fate.
Within the shadows can she no longer hide.
She prepares for their impending fight date.




Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2004-12-13 09:22:28]
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Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:26:27 AM AEST
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wow Mara that was amazing, I love Vampire poems I try to write them but they always sound daft lol

brill writing
pixie xx


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:34:30 AM AEST
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Excellent m'dear, as usual. You have a flare for these type of poems and it shows each time *grins*

love ya sis
- Becca


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:19:00 PM AEST
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perfect mars, i adore the last stanza. talented, keep writing :) xxx


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:18:32 PM AEST
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Great write i liked it a lot
Well done.

~DENNIS~


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:35:06 PM AEST
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ohhhhh dark and forboding.....( looks over shoulder) You really do have a knack for the dark writes dont ya? Very well done
Mars(ha) :oP

Black Roses
Parry


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by SharonAngel on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:59:06 PM AEST
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very good work dear....written with care...what beauty....keep up the great work.


Re: Date Long Past (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:03:50 PM AEST
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i love it mara, beautifully written, great style and flow, im impressed,
i would change one line though:
both out of fright and out of fear.
both out of home and out of fear.
big huggles and i love you kid, mom xxx
p.s. call me, nobody takes a 24 hour nap






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