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That sickly feeling that hurt of green.
Forever aching inside can seem.
Blinded by the art of desire.
Looking at you and burn like fire!
Once begotten with briiliant red.
Facing towards the things that was said.
Not knowing how to fix.
The awful sentences that were awful tricks.
Steaming thoughts swirl in ones head.
Wishing we belonged together instead.
Swollen eyes that slant, looking stale.
Can't think straight, feeling quite pale.
Memories of those great times in the past.
Why can't we just make them last?
Waiting each day to fall into place.
I hope together we can win this race.
Jealousy should be kicked out the window.
So happiness will surely follow!!!
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Jealousy

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:49:38 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

~*~
That sickly feeling that hurt of green.
Forever aching inside can seem.
Blinded by the art of desire.
Looking at you and burn like fire!
Once begotten with briiliant red.
Facing towards the things that was said.
Not knowing how to fix.
The awful sentences that were awful tricks.
Steaming thoughts swirl in ones head.
Wishing we belonged together instead.
Swollen eyes that slant, looking stale.
Can't think straight, feeling quite pale.
Memories of those great times in the past.
Why can't we just make them last?
Waiting each day to fall into place.
I hope together we can win this race.
Jealousy should be kicked out the window.
So happiness will surely follow!!!
~*~

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-12-13 06:49:38]
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Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:52:48 AM AEST
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a little bit of jealousy shows that you care but too much can ruin a relationship. great write,

pixie xx

Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:16:22 AM AEST
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Good write Coni, Nice to see you posting again..
Jenni

Re: Jealousy (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:47:04 PM AEST
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Very interesting subject.
Extraordinary to chose it for a poem.
As I see it, a reasonable amount of jealousy can be proper and absolutely normal. But when it goes overboard it poisons any relationship.. Reciprocation of love can be expected from the normal and loving human being, and its being withdrawn and given to where it does not belong, that hurta and is justifiable jealosy. But the jealousy of domineering possessiveness - i.e. selfishnes s is truly poison.
DISTINGUISH THE SPIRITS!! (as the great Apostle says).
Blessings
Elizabeth

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