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Save Me

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Save me from the rotting corpse,
That appears to me riding his horse,
He rides over my soul it hurts so much,
I can’t escape now I’m within his clutch.

I scream I bleed I am rotting in his breath,
Save me soon or there will be nothing left,
He laughs which pierces my lungs,
To my sanity this demon has clung.

His face masked underneath a dark cloak,
But the stench he gives off makes me choke,
His fingers have no flesh left on the bones,
He speaks in such a haunting & eerie tone.

I feel myself freeze as he approaches,
Inside his chest crawl a thousand cockroaches,
Worms, maggots have ravaged his torso,
In his eye sockets there lays an evil glow.

Out to me with his skeletal figure he reaches,
I can feel his wanting as this demon screeches,
Wanting me for his dark & sexual needs,
Inside me his little spawns he wants to breed.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-12-13 06:21:53]
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Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:28:52 AM AEST
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Oh I like this one :) I'm sure Dennis will to lol he likes them dark.
But seriously this is a great write.
Blessings.
MaDonna


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:29:25 AM AEST
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Oh me.
don't really know what to say to this except demon be gone in Jesus name, amen!
Awesome writing.
Keep writing, my friend.
Very moving and so real.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:32:46 AM AEST
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Wow that was dark, very cool write.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by musicisluv7 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:36:48 AM AEST
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sounds lyk you're going thru a rough tym. you've got the stregnth to beat these memories, i'll pray for you. gr8 write!
much luv *smiles*
musicisluv7
P.S thanx 4 commentin on my poem, it means a lot to me;-)


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:41:45 AM AEST
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Another great write I like this one a lot I could see the images within my minds eye. You did a wounderful job Keep up the drak writes.

~DENNIS~


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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wow this is amazing!! i absolutely loved it!!! fantastic write!!

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 04:59:16 PM AEST
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wow that's really really good! wonderful! i love it ^_^ and that guy...he makes me feel weak and i feel like i want him to take me...




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