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Answer Me
Contributed by
AngelEmmA
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As i lie bleeding
while you watch me rot
from the lack of love im needing
from pretending im fine when im not
how do you laugh
at me when i offer my all
how do you let it pass
when im crying curled up in a ball
how can you sleep
in your warm little bed
when all i do is wheep
over what was said
why dont you cry
instead of bottling it away
when all i do is try
because theres no way to say
how i feel
not even knowing
if this pain is real
while im sittin her sewing
whats left of my heart together
do you remember
when i was trying to sever
what was left
but for once you never
showed you cared
when i said i'de love you forever
even though i sat there and bared
my very soul
so deep
watching your eyes roll
while you throw my heart back to keep
how can you be so thoughtless
try to answer my questions with haste
because now im timeless
i dont want my love to go to waste
...just answer me...
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AngelEmmA
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Re: Answer Me
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by Black_Rose on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:36:21 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing. The emotion really comes to life through your chosen diction and syntax. I especially liked the lines: "when i said i'd love you forever / even though i sat there and bared / my very soul / so deep / watching your eyes roll / while you throw my heart back to keep" Great imagery and emotion there. Sometimes, too, all we need to have our past loves answer us "why." I'm in the same boat.... |
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Re: Answer Me
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:49:38 AM AEST
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| wow its so beautiful.... |
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Re: Answer Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:50:15 AM AEST
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amazing write ! its sad how you can love and go to the ends of the earth for someone and they don't return the effort or love.. people need to appreciate good things when they have them .. I hope you find someone better who deserves your efforts and love
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Answer Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:01:14 AM AEST
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awesome poem. i especially liked the last stanza
"how can you be so thoughtless
try to answer my questions with haste
because now im timeless
i dont want my love to go to waste"
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