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Array ( [sid] => 75511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Being raped [time] => 2004-12-12 22:26:04 [hometext] => this hasn't happened to me... i have just read a lot of these poems lately and it inspired me to write one... [bodytext] => He has me on the bed now
He tells me not to fight it
I don't want to do this
But he pins me down and won't let go

He's forcing me to stay down
He has my hands above my head
Holding them while he rapes me
All the while I'm trying so hard not to scream

He's hurting me so much
I just want him to get off
I can't hold my screams in anymore
Let me go I cry

He's not showing any sign of giving up
STOP I scream
But he won't get off
He just keeps going

God please make him stop
Just make him get off
I can't stand this anymore
Plese make him stop

When he's finally done with me I can't move
He stares at me like I'm pathetic
Like he did nothing wrong
When it was him who did everything wrong

I'm getting better now
The dreams arn't so bad
But I'll never be able to forget that night
I'll always have the memory of it stuck in my head [comments] => 5 [counter] => 400 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Being raped

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



He has me on the bed now
He tells me not to fight it
I don't want to do this
But he pins me down and won't let go

He's forcing me to stay down
He has my hands above my head
Holding them while he rapes me
All the while I'm trying so hard not to scream

He's hurting me so much
I just want him to get off
I can't hold my screams in anymore
Let me go I cry

He's not showing any sign of giving up
STOP I scream
But he won't get off
He just keeps going

God please make him stop
Just make him get off
I can't stand this anymore
Plese make him stop

When he's finally done with me I can't move
He stares at me like I'm pathetic
Like he did nothing wrong
When it was him who did everything wrong

I'm getting better now
The dreams arn't so bad
But I'll never be able to forget that night
I'll always have the memory of it stuck in my head




Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-12-12 22:26:04]
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Re: Being raped (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:59:49 PM AEST
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thank God it hasn't happened to u.
Very good write u have here 'cause it never goes away and pops up up in your mind when least expected.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Being raped (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:07:03 AM AEST
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I have been raped and you have expressed this well *hugs* glad that this didnt happen to you, it is a shame that so many women go through this and are too scared to report it

good writing, hard hitting

pixie xx


Re: Being raped (User Rating: 1 )
by deepdarkthinker on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:00:59 AM AEST
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your poem was realy good and its exactley what rape victams think while it is happening and after i should know ive been there great poem


Re: Being raped (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:51:37 PM AEST
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You amaze me, you really do. You express this so well, I don't get how you can do it. Your writing is the most powerful. This one is really hard for me to read though. But I enjoyed reading all of your poems...

Love You,
Britnee...

*hugs* I'm really happy this didn't happen to you.


Re: Being raped (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:25:36 PM AEST
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I'm glad this wasn't a real happening with you. It's too bad it happens at all,but there is sickness of mind in this world.
Your poem covers this subject very well and it's a shame women sometimes blame themselves when it is "never--Never" their fault.
You write well.
Sinned




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