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A place only I know of
You will not find it
Even if you tried
And I will not say
What lies beyond the barrior
Who you see and who I am
Are two differant people
I am not a happy cafe-free soul
Laughing and smiling
My heart hidden far from here
I weep and want to leave
But I show nothing but cheer and joy
This is not me
Inside I want to die
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Two Sides Of The Same Person

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My mind wanders to a dark place
A place only I know of
You will not find it
Even if you tried
And I will not say
What lies beyond the barrior
Who you see and who I am
Are two differant people
I am not a happy cafe-free soul
Laughing and smiling
My heart hidden far from here
I weep and want to leave
But I show nothing but cheer and joy
This is not me
Inside I want to die
I welcome death with open arms

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2004-12-12 16:58:17]
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Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:01:57 PM AEST
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powerful write.

Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:07:25 PM AEST
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This poem seems as if I had written it myself and I can't believe how much I can relate with this beautiful and powerful poem. I applaud you.

Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Gunda on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:40:27 PM AEST
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Really good writen, and it went strigth to my heart. It felt like you had writen it abouth me.

Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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Everyone creates their own mask to hide behind. Everyone has a secret they keep lock up deep inside. Great write.

~DENNIS~

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