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The Deceased
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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The deceased lay at my feet
They reach out to touch me
With out ever moving
Their eyes stare at me
Wanting me to join them
I beg them to leave me be
But they dont hear my pleas
I admire them
The stiffness of their bodies
The blankness of their eyes
I ponder what it is to be like them
My fragile exsistance
Makes no sense to me
I rest my head next to them in the catacombs
I read their tombs
Children Men and Women
They are all dead
I wonder what they know
What the Knew
They who are the deceased lying at my feet
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Re: The Deceased
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:35:05 AM AEST (User
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a very good Pyschotic poem, liked this,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Deceased
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:38:07 AM AEST (User
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Very well written. I can relate to wondering what it would feel like to be one amoung the dead. It just makes you wonder. Liked this very much :)
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: The Deceased
(User Rating: 1 ) by xtremcalibur on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 02:47:02 PM AEST (User
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Though I may not have wanted to be among the dead, I have been on the dark side of life. Very interesting poem ~ not my style at all, but I am open to poems that give me insight to the different minds. Very good write. Hope to see more. |
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