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Betrayed

Contributed by Apolla on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



What do you do when your betrayed by the one you love the most?
The one you told everything, always and you thought forever.
But then someone came in and took your place,
And you didn't know what to do.
At first you cried,
But then you could barely shed one tear,
So your thoughts were trapped inside you,
Fr the one you love most,
Te one you told everything, always,
Had betrayed you,
And was no longer there.




Copyright © Apolla ... [ 2004-12-12 09:37:26]
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Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:47:01 AM AEST
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emotional and deep, can feel so much pain in this write,

pixie xx


Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:28:34 AM AEST
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i can relate....something similar just happened to me...she wasn't the one i loved most...but she was very close. I like your poem..good job
-Sami-


Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:22:20 AM AEST
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You get up, brush yourself off, and move on... that is after crying your heart out....
Hope you feel better..
Good write...
Jenni


Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:26:27 PM AEST
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Your poem reminded me of Brain...you see he was always really nice and I told him everything...but then behind my back would tell everyone....yeah...this is so truthful. I like.
-Tsubaki


Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by athena on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:12:56 PM AEST
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so deep i can connect...i thought it was bueatiful.
from one godess to another,
*athena


Re: Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:44:46 AM AEST
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So much sadness written within to be betrayed
If only we could go back in time
And stop the hury before it came to light.

NICELY WRITTEN

~DENNIS~




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