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That I can't seem to clear
No matter how hard I try
It just won't disappear
I have cried as much
As my eyes will allow
When I try to speak
It is like my words just split in two
The only time they stay together
Is when I talk to you
You make me feel like life actually matters
And that there is an answer to my problems
Without you
I would be lost
In a place where my life is upside down
And there is no escape
A place where I am without you
This place is my mind

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Too Much On My Mind

Contributed by unlovedchild on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:43:47 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is too much on my mind
That I can't seem to clear
No matter how hard I try
It just won't disappear
I have cried as much
As my eyes will allow
When I try to speak
It is like my words just split in two
The only time they stay together
Is when I talk to you
You make me feel like life actually matters
And that there is an answer to my problems
Without you
I would be lost
In a place where my life is upside down
And there is no escape
A place where I am without you
This place is my mind

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2004-12-12 03:43:47]
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Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:56:47 AM AEST
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this is sweet and well-written. nice job

Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:35:54 AM AEST
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Amy, this is so sad and beautiful. Such a great poem to share with us.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:05:29 AM AEST
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awww Amy , this is written so well, it is sad and beautiful all rolled into oe, great poem indeed :)

pixie xx

Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:46:25 AM AEST
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sincere and sincere language , a obvious one intoxicated poetry ,wonderful

Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:26:55 PM AEST
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That is beautiful... I especially like the ending. Very well written

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Too Much On My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:24:17 PM AEST
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Awww, Amy, this is really good, very emotional. I can relate to it.

It also makes me feel very sad.

Keep up the good work.

*huggies*
Phil xxx

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