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Array ( [sid] => 75401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't forget her [time] => 2004-12-12 02:23:52 [hometext] => about my ex gf [bodytext] => She talked to me
After all these weeks
She finally asked how I was doing
I seen her picture
Still as beautiful as ever
Old thoughts and memories rushing in
Almost more then I can handle
A tear forms in my eye
My heartaches like it never healed
My heart crushing thinking about the way she is
How did I fall in love with her
Maybe it was her personality
That sure is enough for me
Not for her though
Is there such a thing as true love
I'd like someone to prove it
I miss her still
Someone needs to take her place
I just can't forget her [comments] => 6 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Can't forget her

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She talked to me
After all these weeks
She finally asked how I was doing
I seen her picture
Still as beautiful as ever
Old thoughts and memories rushing in
Almost more then I can handle
A tear forms in my eye
My heartaches like it never healed
My heart crushing thinking about the way she is
How did I fall in love with her
Maybe it was her personality
That sure is enough for me
Not for her though
Is there such a thing as true love
I'd like someone to prove it
I miss her still
Someone needs to take her place
I just can't forget her

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-12-12 02:23:52]
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Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:08:57 AM AEST
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Let bright memory stay in heart, became it since already yesterday of eternity, in fact, bright thing always deep and eternal, follow every day when we grew up.

Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:02:23 AM AEST
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this is so sad, but beautifully written. hang in there though. i know it's a cliche, but everything happens for a reason and time heals all wounds. :-)

Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:06:24 AM AEST
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hoppe that time will be a great healer for you, this was written with so much emotion and feeling, great expresseion of a love lost and grealty missed

pixie xx

Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:42:49 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. Was a really beautiful poem

Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:46:13 AM AEST
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Ouch....this one hit me hard. Memories flood back.......

Very well done
Barkeep!
Larry

Re: Can't forget her (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:46:15 PM AEST
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wow this was a very good write !
She sounds like she meant a lot to you, I hope that you find somebody to fill that empty space...
I hate the feeling of being lonely... yet I cant come to part with having the freedom...

*~Alicia~*

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