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or what it is that i didn't
did i love you too much
or did you love me too little
this circle of hate we dance in
only closes the doors on our love
why are we fighting again
do we know what it's even about
we keep retracing our footsteps
despite our vows to move on
this constant tasting of past hurts
only makes the pain prolong
i'd give you my life if you'd take it
but you won't so i'll take it myself
i'd die for you in a minute
not for anyone else
I can only think we're a mismatch
perhaps we were never meant to be
if that's the case then let this be the last
so i can love you in my dreams
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 32 [informant] => AnastasiaN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Love & Hate

Contributed by AnastasiaN on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

can you tell me what i did to you
or what it is that i didn't
did i love you too much
or did you love me too little
this circle of hate we dance in
only closes the doors on our love
why are we fighting again
do we know what it's even about
we keep retracing our footsteps
despite our vows to move on
this constant tasting of past hurts
only makes the pain prolong
i'd give you my life if you'd take it
but you won't so i'll take it myself
i'd die for you in a minute
not for anyone else
I can only think we're a mismatch
perhaps we were never meant to be
if that's the case then let this be the last
so i can love you in my dreams

Copyright © AnastasiaN ... [ 2004-12-12 01:02:52]
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Re: Love & Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:10:40 AM AEST
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i think there is a thin line between love and hate, when you are in a relationship, as one minute you can be all loved up, the next having a screaming row with them, but if you can get over your rows then your love is strong, this poem tells of your deep, deep love for Bradley, hope he knows how lucky he is to have a girl who loves him like this,
great poem,

pixie xx

Re: Love & Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:19:06 PM AEST
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good write and i do know how lucky iam but i didnt notice it tell i lost her now iam fighting every day to get the one that means more then life back and it hurts knowing i didnt try befor i lost it good write tasia i loved it.

bradley

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