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Array ( [sid] => 75383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye... [time] => 2004-12-11 22:21:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She glides her finger across her frigid body
It is completely white and soaked in death
And now she can blend in with the snow
As she has always dreamed.
Shivering, she sings sadly a love song,
And her life is gone with her words.

Why do people constantly lie
and will they never understand?
That this is why tonight I die
and seep my flesh into Winter's sand.
Again I feel this searing sting
My heart is sick
My life is thin
Never shall he see me again.
My wings are broken
He never came
But all my time
It's been the same.
He doesn't care.

Spoke the fallen angel
Softly and beautifully.
She clutched her necklace,
All she wore
And kissed the white snow
To become it's mate. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 32 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Goodbye...

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She glides her finger across her frigid body
It is completely white and soaked in death
And now she can blend in with the snow
As she has always dreamed.
Shivering, she sings sadly a love song,
And her life is gone with her words.

Why do people constantly lie
and will they never understand?
That this is why tonight I die
and seep my flesh into Winter's sand.
Again I feel this searing sting
My heart is sick
My life is thin
Never shall he see me again.
My wings are broken
He never came
But all my time
It's been the same.
He doesn't care.

Spoke the fallen angel
Softly and beautifully.
She clutched her necklace,
All she wore
And kissed the white snow
To become it's mate.

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2004-12-11 22:21:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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original write.

Re: Goodbye... (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:49:16 PM AEST
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very original... I have a picture that goes perfect with this..

Re: Goodbye... (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST
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the first image wasn't completely clear to me but i got a picture in my mind that was simply screaming when i read this line "and seep my flesh into Winter's sand." i liked the originality of the poem but also found it to be slightly hard to grasp. I think that there is a personal presence in this poem and that helps make up for the lack of my comprehension. Good

~pain is like internal bleeding, sometimes you feel it and sometimes it just kills you~weepingprophet

Re: Goodbye... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:05:24 AM AEST
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i love the imagery. very good write. thanks for sharing.

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