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Array ( [sid] => 75361 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a Dream..... [time] => 2004-12-11 19:55:12 [hometext] => Comments would be appreciated!!! [bodytext] =>
We meet, and I look into your eyes,

I only want you, I dont want no other guys,

You look at me, and I smile,

Being with you makes my life worthwhile,

My heart skips a beat as we embrace,

Love and Happiness is written all over my face,

Its not as real as it seems,

I wake up, and its just a dream,

Were together when the sun rises and when the sun sets,

Being with you, i have no regrets,

I melt into your arms as we kiss,

You treat me like a Princess,

I love to feel your touch,

every minute with you means so much,

Dont leave me, youre the one i love,

Youre also the one im dreaming of,

Its not as real as it seems,

I wake up, and its just a dream..........

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 556 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Jenn2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Just a Dream.....

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

We meet, and I look into your eyes,

I only want you, I dont want no other guys,

You look at me, and I smile,

Being with you makes my life worthwhile,

My heart skips a beat as we embrace,

Love and Happiness is written all over my face,

Its not as real as it seems,

I wake up, and its just a dream,

Were together when the sun rises and when the sun sets,

Being with you, i have no regrets,

I melt into your arms as we kiss,

You treat me like a Princess,

I love to feel your touch,

every minute with you means so much,

Dont leave me, youre the one i love,

Youre also the one im dreaming of,

Its not as real as it seems,

I wake up, and its just a dream..........

Copyright © Jenn2004 ... [ 2004-12-11 19:55:12]
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Re: Just a Dream..... (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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i really liked this one.....i loved the concept

Re: Just a Dream..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:05:38 PM AEST
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A masterpeice 'cause we probably all had these kinds of dreams.
Keep up the good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Just a Dream..... (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:30:03 PM AEST
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don't you wish you could just go on dreaming? I do.

good job.

Re: Just a Dream..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Gemz_World on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:46:25 PM AEST
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hi, i think ur poem is fantastic. It's so effective the way u've used the words. I think ur an excellent poet and u should keep writing. Well done, keep it up from Gem xx

Re: Just a Dream..... (User Rating: 1 )
by SharonAngel on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:22:20 PM AEST
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Awesome poem...you have a great talent....keep up the great work.

Sharon

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