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Bleeding tears
Contributed by
Apolla
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Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:26:41 PM in AEST
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Bleeding tears fall from her eyes,
And yet.....no one seems to understand.
The reasoning behind her endless sorrow,
Or why she never smiles.
She soaks her pillow with these endless tears,
the tears which never release her.
From the endless shadow of pain which everyday she has to call her life,
All the time wondering 'WIll it ever subside?'
So deep are the wounds which surpress her,
that she shall never have her wounds healed, only forever deepening.
She tries with all her might to subdue,
The bleeding tears which fall from her eyes.
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Apolla
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2004-12-11 18:26:41]
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by Black_Rose on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:03:00 PM AEST
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| wonderful! i know how you feel, too (sucks, huh??) |
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:53:12 PM AEST
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wow awesome write.. I can relate.. great job!!
peace and hope
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by Artemis03 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:01:59 PM AEST
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| It's funny to realize how much i can RELATE..I mean I really can relate...but of course you probably already know. it's beautiful. Luv ya. |
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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I'm speechless.... In one poem you discribe me...wow.
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Tsubaki |
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:15:14 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully tragic but wonderful all the same. I too cry such tears..Thanks for commenting... |
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Re: Bleeding tears
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by rrr-1947 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:22:19 PM AEST
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| A beautiful expression of feelings that somehow bings the sadness out of the deep caverns of one's heart. You have a way with words, keep that ability in your mind, as well as in your hands as you write down your thoughts....... |
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