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[aid] => mick
[title] => an hour before
[time] => 2004-12-11 17:51:37
[hometext] => i hope u do....
[bodytext] => an hour before the day i was born i was swimming in love eyes closed and breathing through your beautiful lips and as it came closer as i saw for the first time your eyes were deep and dark oceans in the blinding light taken from me everything jaded everything faded dont forget the keys my dear hands shaking and late to everywhere and everything dont forget we were larger than life and now much much smaller than letting go let go an hour before the day i was born and in the 21rst century im more likely to be in a trash can somewhere more likely to starve through my first night on the earth more likely to be addicted to the drug my mother consumed while having me when she did more likely, to be dead. an hour before the day i was born we were here under the stars above the sea and you were so beautiful ready to give life your eyes glowwith compassion and mine glow with fear love is life and life is taken in a moment as the heart freezes still and maybe michal, im the opposite of perfect right now but once i was in your eyes everything but what i am now nothing but stardust nothing but sand foolishly waiting to be taken by the sea once more to kiss your depths to fill your eyes to burn within your heart to seep through the cracks in your window and onto your beautiful hair just enough to break time just enough to tear you just enough to scare you just enough for you to want to say three words, (i know, its ok that u cant) i am sorry.... an hour before the day i was born your car was stolen you let yourself hold what you couldnt bare not untill now not untill today so why make that promise just to break it..... an hour before the day i was born you were an angel a stars tear on the window a wish is the most beautiful thing this world can offer and you were and you are today as you stand so close but u ran so far and here i am tonight following your footprints in the sand all the way to the sea... " kill me sara, kill me again, with love" - thom yorke, lucky i love you an hour before the day i was born has past and you're still here thank you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 636 [topic] => 12 [informant] => feathercut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => CongratulatoryPoems )
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